Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子不够自然且有语法错误。回答应以主题句开头并简洁说明频率，随后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态、冠词和动词搭配（e.g. 'use my phone' 而不是 'serving on my computer'）。尽量控制在最多五句内并使用连接词如 'and' 或 'so' 来衔接。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone and computer. Many apps display banners or pop-up ads, and I usually notice them while scrolling social media.

Suggestion: 表达混乱且有较多语法和词汇错误。回答应先直接说有或没有，然后具体描述该广告（产品、特点、为什么难忘），并用连接词如 'because' 或 'which' 使句子流畅。注意主谓一致和名词单复数。

Example: Yes, one ad that impressed me was for a Taiwanese medicine called Liao Jing. It was memorable because the commercial used a catchy jingle that many people still remember today.

Suggestion: 回答较短且部分内容不清楚（例如 'a lot of birds' 可能是笔误或表达错误）。建议先概括有无，然后用具体例子说明广告常见位置和类型，并用连词 'for example' 加以展开。注意单复数和限定词。

Example: Yes, there is a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, in Taichung buses often have full-body wraps and posters promoting new products and events.

Suggestion: 表达重复且语法不准确（如 'it can always notice me' 应为 'they catch my attention'）。建议先给出立场，然后用一两点具体原因支持，并用连接词如 'because' 或 'so'。最后可补充自己的行为（例如是否购买）。

Example: Yes, I quite like advertisements because they catch my attention and introduce new products. However, I rarely buy things directly from ads because I prefer to read reviews first.

Suggestion: 回答不够清晰且有多处语法错误。应明确指出喜欢哪种广告（信息型、幽默型、视觉吸引型等），并解释原因，使用连接词如 'because' 来组织句子。避免含糊的代词和不完整句。

Example: I prefer informative ads that clearly explain a product's features because they help me decide whether it's useful. I also like visually striking app ads that catch my eye while browsing.

Suggestion: 回答内容明确但表达冗长且有错误（例如重复 'because' 和错用 'us'）。建议先直接回答，然后简要说明原因并使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so'，保持句子简洁。

Example: No, I have never bought something just because of an advertisement because I usually look for online reviews and comparisons before I make a purchase.

× Yes, I often see the advertisement when I use my phone and serving on my computer.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone and surf on my computer.

原句中“see the advertisement”在泛指情况下应使用复数或不定冠词，且“serving on my computer”是用词错误。应使用“surf on my computer”或更常见“use my computer/surf the internet”。建议使用“see advertisements”与“use/surf on my computer”。

× Yes, there is a advertisement which is introduce a product called Liao Jing in Taiwan and why this made me impress because these are the medicine would always singing.

✓ Yes, there was an advertisement that introduced a product called Liao Jing in Taiwan, and it impressed me because the medicines were always sung about in a catchy tune.

原句中多处错误：1) “there is a advertisement”冠词使用错误，应为“an advertisement”；2) 时态与上下文（“when you were a child”）应使用过去时“was”；3) “which is introduce”语法错误，应使用过去式“that introduced”；4) “why this made me impress”结构不自然，应为“it impressed me”；5) “these are the medicine would always singing”时态、数和动词形式错误，应改为“the medicines were always sung about / sung in a jingle”。改正后使句子时态一致、冠词正确、动词形式合适。建议多注意冠词（a/an/the）、时态一致以及被动/主动结构。

× There is a famous tone all Taiwanese or known these.

✓ There was a famous tune that all Taiwanese knew.

原句语序和动词形式错误：1) 上下文为过去，主句应为过去时“was”；2) “tone”应为“tune”（曲调）更合适；3) “all Taiwanese or known these”结构混乱，应为“that all Taiwanese knew”。建议注意时态一致和从句结构。

× Yes, I see a lot of advertising on the bus. For example in Taichung, you can see a lot of birds there. A lot of company are sharing their new product.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertising on buses. For example, in Taichung you can see a lot of ads there. Many companies are promoting their new products.

原句问题：1) “on the bus”若泛指应为“on buses”；2) “a lot of birds”应为“ads/advertisements”语义错误；3) “A lot of company are”主谓不一致且单复数错误，应为“Many companies are”；4) “their new product”若泛指多种应为“their new products”。建议检查可数名词单复数及词汇选择。

× Yes, I quite like ads because it can always notice me.

✓ Yes, I quite like ads because they can always catch my attention.

原句中主语“ads”为复数，但使用了单数代词“it”与不合适的动词“notice me”。应使用复数代词“they”并用合适短语“catch my attention”。建议注意主语与代词/动词的一致性，以及固定搭配用法。

× There are a lot of new product coming out so I can know a lot of different thing.

✓ There are a lot of new products coming out, so I can learn about many different things.

错误包括：1) “new product”应为复数“new products”；2) “coming out”后缺逗号并且后的“know a lot of different thing”用词与数都不对，应该是“learn about many different things”。建议使用恰当的动词（learn about）和名词复数形式。

× I never buy it.

✓ I never buy them.

上下文指代广告中的多个产品，应使用复数代词“them”与动词“buy”。建议注意代词与先行词的一致性。

× For me, I prefer the others have a lot of information and the apps can catch my eyes because when I saw the new *** I can directly know what the I want to talk me about.

✓ For me, I prefer ads that have a lot of information and apps that can catch my eye, because when I see a new ad I can immediately know what it wants to tell me about.

原句问题：1) “prefer the others have”结构错误，应为“prefer ads that have”或“prefer that others have”但语义不同；2) “catch my eyes”常用单数“catch my eye”；3) 时态应与一般陈述一致使用现在时“see”；4) “what the I want to talk me about”语序与代词混乱，应为“what it wants to tell me about”。建议理清先行词与定语从句结构，使用正确代词和动词时态。

× No, I never bought something because of us because I prefer going online to search some comment about the product before I buy the new things, so I never buy it from because of the advertisement.

✓ No, I have never bought anything because of an ad because I prefer going online to read reviews about a product before I buy new things, so I have never bought anything because of an advertisement.

句子时态、代词和词汇混乱：1) “bought something because of us”中的“us”用错，且“something”与否定搭配更常用“anything”；2) 上下文应用现在完成时“have never bought”表示到现在为止的经历；3) “search some comment”应为“read reviews”或“look up reviews”；4) “buy the new things”不自然，改为“buy new things”；5) 末尾“buy it from because of the advertisement”冗余且语序错误。建议使用现在完成时描述经历，注意代词和固定搭配（read reviews, because of an ad）。