Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler sounds (uh, um), correct word choice (advertisements, distracting), and give one specific example of when ads interrupt you. Keep answers under five sentences and use linking words like 'for example' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, video ads usually pop up while I’m watching a clip, which is distracting and interrupts my concentration. As a result, I sometimes use an ad blocker to avoid them.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct tense and clearer vocabulary. State whether there was a memorable ad, briefly describe it, and explain why it impressed you using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Be specific about elements (humor, song, character) rather than vague statements.

Example: Yes, there was a funny TV commercial that impressed me as a child because it used a catchy jingle and a silly character. I remember laughing at the character’s exaggerated actions, so the ad stayed with me even though I was young.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured response: start with a topic sentence, then add a specific detail or example. Use correct noun forms (posters, hung) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'for example' to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains and buses. For example, posters and digital screens are often displayed inside carriages, especially ads for mobile apps and local events, which makes the travel environment very commercial.

Suggestion: Provide a balanced, concise answer. Start with your opinion, then give one clear reason and one contrast if needed (past vs present). Fix grammar (I don’t like advertisements; they ruin my mood) and avoid filler. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'.

Example: No, I don’t like advertisements because they often interrupt what I’m watching and ruin my mood. However, I enjoyed adverts as a child because they were entertaining and often featured catchy music.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence stating current preference, then give a specific example and a reason. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (I enjoy ads with songs, featuring my favorite celebrities). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Example: Currently, I prefer advertisements that feature music or popular celebrities because the song makes the ad memorable and I like seeing familiar faces. For example, I enjoy short ads with catchy tunes starring my favorite singer because they are entertaining and easy to remember.

× I typically, yes, I typically, uh, see advertiser dicement when, whenever I use phone, uh, or computer and uh, I, it was very irritated whenever I was something important for.

✓ I typically see advertisements whenever I use my phone or computer, and they are very irritating when I am doing something important.

Errors: 'advertiser dicement' is a misspelling and wrong form — correct plural noun is 'advertisements' (related to pluralization and word choice). 'use phone' lacks a possessive — needs 'my phone' (incorrect use of pronouns/article). 'it was very irritated' is incorrect passive/sentence structure and wrong verb form — should be 'they are very irritating' to describe ongoing effect (present tense and adjective use). 'whenever I was something important for' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'when I am doing something important.' Suggestion: use correct plural nouns, possessive pronouns, present simple for habitual actions, and 'irritating' as an adjective describing the advertisements.

× I have watched many advertisement when I were a child but there was a one of funny ad which makes me lot of laugh in my childhood and I totally don't remember that add because I was very little.

✓ I watched many advertisements when I was a child, and there was one funny ad that made me laugh a lot, but I don't really remember it because I was very young.

Errors: 'have watched' with 'when I were a child' — mixed tense; use simple past 'watched' for past time expression (past tense issue). 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'were' should be 'was' with singular subject 'I'. 'there was a one of funny ad' is incorrect word order and articles — correct is 'there was one funny ad'. 'which makes me lot of laugh' mixes tenses and word order — should be 'that made me laugh a lot'. 'add' is misspelled; 'very little' is not natural for age — use 'very young'. Suggestion: keep past-time expressions in simple past, correct singular/plural and article usage, and use natural collocations like 'laugh a lot' and 'very young'.

× Uh, yes, whenever I go outside, uh, especially on buses or other transport or trains, there are many advertisement poster poster are hanged in the wall and uh, most of famous in.

✓ Yes, whenever I go out, especially on buses or trains, there are many advertising posters hung on the walls, and most are very noticeable.

Errors: 'go outside' is acceptable but 'go out' is more natural; 'on buses or other transport or trains' is redundant — use 'buses or trains'. 'advertisement poster poster' is repetition and wrong form — use 'advertising posters'. 'are hanged' is incorrect; the past participle for hang in this context is 'hung'. 'in the wall' should be 'on the walls' (preposition error). The fragment 'most of famous in' is incomplete and ungrammatical; clarified to 'most are very noticeable.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'on the walls', correct participle 'hung', and simplify redundant phrases.

× Uh, no, I don't like advertisement because it ruins my mood whenever I see a whenever watches something important or latest songs or movies.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements because they ruin my mood when I am watching something important or new songs and movies.

Errors: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally (quantifier/plural issue). 'it ruins my mood' should agree with plural subject -> 'they ruin my mood' (subject-verb agreement). 'whenever I see a whenever watches' is garbled and mixes subjects; intended is 'when I am watching'. 'latest songs or movies' is awkward — use 'new songs and movies'. Suggestion: use plural forms for general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use continuous tense 'am watching' for activities in progress.

× Uh, but when I when I was a child, I really enjoy every advertisement on TV.

✓ But when I was a child, I really enjoyed every advertisement on TV.

Errors: 'was' (past) with 'really enjoy' (present) is a tense mismatch; use past 'really enjoyed' to match the time frame (past tense issue). Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past tense when describing past habits.

× When when I was child, I enjoy every kind of advertising, but now I I mostly enjoy the, uh, songs advertisement in which my favorite celebrity are are.

✓ When I was a child, I enjoyed every kind of advertising, but now I mostly enjoy song advertisements that feature my favorite celebrities.

Errors: 'was child' missing article 'a' — should be 'was a child'. 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed' to match past time. 'songs advertisement' should be 'song advertisements' (noun order and plural). 'in which my favorite celebrity are are' has incorrect relative clause and subject-verb agreement — use 'that feature my favorite celebrities.' Suggestion: include articles 'a', match verb tense to time frame, use correct noun order and pluralization, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.