Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g. plural/singular, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone. For example, on YouTube I frequently get ads for makeup and new clothing brands, which appear before the videos. These ads catch my attention because I like fashion and beauty products.

Suggestion: Clarify the story with correct tense and clear sequence. Begin with a direct statement about the ad, then give specific details (product, why it impressed you, a brief result). Use linking words for coherence and avoid pronoun confusion.

Example: Yes. When I was a child, a TV advertisement for Sita shoes impressed me. It showed colorful designs and children running happily, so I really wanted those shoes and asked my parents to buy them. That ad stayed in my memory because it looked fun and friendly.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and then provide specific examples and correct vocabulary. Use linking words like 'however' or 'sometimes' to connect ideas, and replace vague phrases with precise descriptions (e.g. health clinics, recruitment ads).

Example: Not really; I don't see many ads on trains. However, when I travel by bus I sometimes notice posters for healthcare clinics and recruitment or service advertisements, especially near bus stations.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize points logically: state your general attitude, then give 2–3 specific types you like with brief reasons. Use consistent grammar and avoid repeating 'advertisements' unnecessarily.

Example: I like some advertisements, especially those for makeup and clothing because I enjoy fashion. I also pay attention to medical or healthcare ads since I work in that field and they provide useful information.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the types you prefer, then explain reasons briefly and coherently. Use correct nouns and linking words; avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases like 'band' if you mean 'brands'.

Example: I prefer ads for makeup, shoes and fashion brands because they help me discover new styles. Lately I also pay attention to job advertisements since I'm actively looking for work, so those ads are especially useful.

× Yes, I often see advertisement when I am using my mobile phone.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am using my mobile phone.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural because the sentence refers to multiple occurrences in general. Use 'advertisements' for countable plural nouns when speaking about more than one. Suggestion: Use plural form 'advertisements' for repeated or multiple items.

× I think I am using a YouTube.

✓ I think I am using YouTube.

The proper noun 'YouTube' does not need the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a' before platform names is incorrect. Suggestion: Omit the article with platform names (I am using YouTube).

× I often see the advertisement of makeup products and sometimes new clothes brands.

✓ I often see advertisements for makeup products and sometimes new clothing brands.

Use plural 'advertisements' for multiple ads. Also use 'for' instead of 'of' when indicating what an advertisement is promoting. 'Clothes brands' is better expressed as 'clothing brands' or 'clothes brands' but 'clothing brands' is more natural. Suggestion: Say 'advertisements for makeup products and clothing brands.'

× Yes, I am was my childhood.

✓ Yes, when I was a child.

The phrase 'I am was my childhood' mixes present and past verbs and has incorrect word order. Use the past expression 'when I was a child' to refer to childhood. Suggestion: Replace with 'when I was a child.'

× I am Sita 1 advertisement is related to the shoes, so I think I buy the shoes I am because I was very interested in their shoes.

✓ There was a Sita advertisement related to shoes, so I wanted to buy the shoes because I was very interested in them.

The original sentence has multiple errors: incorrect pronoun use ('I am Sita 1'), wrong word order, and repeated or misplaced clauses. 'There was a Sita advertisement' correctly introduces the ad. Use 'wanted to buy' or 'wanted to buy the shoes' to express past desire. Use 'them' to refer back to 'shoes'. Suggestion: Simplify to a clear past-tense sentence: 'There was a Sita advertisement about shoes, so I wanted to buy them.'

× No, I don't see lot of advertisements on train and other transports.

✓ No, I don't see a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport.

'Lot' needs an article 'a' as 'a lot of'. Use plural 'trains' and 'other forms of transport' or 'other transport' without 'transports'. Suggestion: Say 'a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport.'

× Well, I think sometimes I am travel on buses, I see some advertisements related to the relationships and doctors and moreover.

✓ Well, I think sometimes when I travel on buses, I see some advertisements related to relationships and doctors, among others.

Incorrect use of 'am travel' (should be base verb 'travel' after 'I'). Add 'when' to introduce the time clause. 'the relationships' is unnatural; use 'relationships'. 'Moreover' is misused; use 'among others' or 'and so on'. Suggestion: Use 'when I travel' and list categories correctly.

× Yeah, sometime I like advertisements, but I usually like makeup advertisements and clothes related advertisements.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I like advertisements, but I usually like makeup advertisements and clothing-related advertisements.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Clothes related' should be hyphenated as 'clothing-related' or 'clothes-related'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' and hyphenate compound adjectives: 'clothing-related advertisements.'

× And I am related to the medical line, so I like medical line related advertisement.

✓ And I work in the medical field, so I like advertisements related to the medical field.

'I am related to the medical line' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'I work in the medical field' or 'I am in the medical field'. 'Medical line related advertisement' should be 'advertisements related to the medical field' and pluralized. Suggestion: Say 'I work in the medical field, so I like advertisements related to it.'

× I like advertisement like makeup, shoes, band and sometimes I think new jobs are related advertisement.

✓ I like advertisements about makeup, shoes, and bands, and sometimes I think advertisements about new jobs are relevant.

Use plural 'advertisements'. List items need commas and correct nouns: 'band' should be 'bands' if plural. 'New jobs are related advertisement' is awkward; rephrase to 'advertisements about new jobs.' Suggestion: Use 'advertisements about...' and plural nouns for categories.

× I like most because I'm searching.

✓ I like them most because I'm searching for a job.

The sentence is incomplete and vague. 'I like most' needs an object ('them') and 'I'm searching' should specify what is being searched: 'searching for a job.' Suggestion: Clarify the object and include the preposition: 'I'm searching for a job.'

× Nowadays I'm searching a lot of jobs, so that's why.

✓ Nowadays I'm searching for a lot of jobs, so that's why.

'Search for' is the correct phrasal verb; 'searching a lot of jobs' is incorrect. Better: 'I'm looking for many jobs' or 'I'm searching for a lot of jobs.' Suggestion: Use 'searching for' or 'looking for' plus count expression: 'many jobs'.