Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答需要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。注意时态与数的一致（e.g. 'advertisements emerge' 应为 'appear'），避免重复表达（如多次提到打开设备）。使用一到两句补充具体例子或原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。控制在最多5句。

Example: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer. For example, when I scroll social media or open websites, banner ads and video ads frequently appear. Because they're targeted, they sometimes affect what I buy or watch.

Suggestion: 回答不够清晰且有语法与词汇错误，难以理解广告内容。应直接指出具体广告并描述印象的原因，使用清晰的时态和词汇（例如 'calfy' 若为品牌需正确拼写或说明），并用连接词补充细节。控制在3–4句内。

Example: Yes. I remember a childhood TV ad for a snack that showed it looking very tasty. The catchy music and bright images made me want to try it, although my parents discouraged me because it was unhealthy.

Suggestion: 回答要更准确地描述场景与细节，纠正词汇错误（'testimony' 应为 'advertisements'），并使用连贯句子。给出具体例子（例如海报、视频屏幕），并说明这些广告为什么难以忽视。保持句子简洁且逻辑清楚。

Example: Yes, I see many ads on public transport. For example, subway trains often have full-carriage posters and digital screens that play short videos, so it's hard to miss them during the commute.

Suggestion: 回答结构基本可行，但表达不够流畅且有重复。应用更自然的短语（e.g. 'it depends on the ad'），并给出1–2个具体例子说明喜欢或不喜欢的广告类型，同时使用连接词如 'however'。

Example: It depends on the ad. I like informative shopping ads that show product details, but I dislike misleading or intrusive ads, for example pop-ups that interrupt what I'm doing.

Suggestion: 回答内容明确但句子不完整且重复。应简洁地说明喜欢的类型并给出具体原因或实例，使用连接词使句子完整。避免句尾不完整的表达，控制在2–3句。

Example: I prefer shopping and food ads because they help me discover new products and restaurants. For instance, a short video review can convince me to try a new dish or buy a piece of clothing.

× Yes, I always think advertisements emerge in my phone and the computer.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on my phone and computer.

句子使用的动词和表达不符合英语习惯。原句用 think 和 emerge 不适合描述“看到广告”的动作，应使用一般现在时的 see 来表示经常发生的情况；介词用 on 更符合“在手机/电脑上出现”的表达。建议多用常见动词（see, appear）并注意介词搭配。

× Whenever I opened social medias or I opened the computer, I can't think much of advertisement.

✓ Whenever I open social media or turn on my computer, I see a lot of advertisements.

原句时态混用（opened 与 can't）不一致，并且 preposition 和名词形式错误：social media 是不可数复数形式，不能加 s；'turn on' 更常用于打开电脑；'can't think much of advertisement' 表达不通，应改为 see a lot of advertisements。时态需用一般现在时来表示习惯性动作。建议简化句子并统一时态。

× I think that's because advertisements has a huge impact that can change people's daily routine.

✓ I think that's because advertisements have a huge impact that can change people's daily routines.

advertisements 为复数，谓语动词应使用 have 而非 has；daily routine 常用复数 daily routines 指不同人的日常。注意主谓一致和名词单复数形式。

× In my memory, the most impressive advertisement is chaos.

✓ In my memory, the most impressive advertisement is 'Chaos'.

句子结构本身可以，但如果广告名为 Chaos，应加引号或大写表明专有名；另外原句后文语句混乱，需明确指代。建议把广告名称明确标出并保持一般现在时。

× Taking the picture is very delicious.

✓ The picture of the food looked very appetizing.

原句用 taking the picture（拍照）和 delicious（美味）组合不合逻辑。需要表达“图片看起来很美味/让人垂涎”，应使用形容词如 appetizing 修饰 picture，或表述 food is delicious。建议根据语境选择合适的名词和形容词搭配。

× In my child, I always want to buy calfy, but my parents said that's not healthy.

✓ When I was a child, I always wanted to buy Calfy, but my parents said it wasn't healthy.

原句有时态和词语错误：应使用过去时描述童年（was, wanted, said），'in my child' 应为 when I was a child；品牌名 Calfy 首字母大写；'that's not healthy' 在过去时语境应改为 wasn't healthy。注意时态一致性和固定表达。

× Yes, obviously lots of testimony on trains or other public transport such as subway and bus.

✓ Yes, there are obviously lots of advertisements on trains and other public transport such as subways and buses.

原句中 testimony 用词错误，应为 advertisements；缺少系动词 there are；transport 名词在列举时用复数（subways and buses）。此外使用一般现在时表常态。建议学习常用名词搭配和存在句 there is/are。

× For example, there are lots of posters on the words and the screen have lots of pictures.

✓ For example, there are lots of posters with words, and the screens have lots of pictures.

原句“the screen have”主谓不一致且表达不清，应把句子拆成并列部分：posters with words 和 screens have pictures。注意复数一致（screens have）。建议检查每个并列部分是否都有主语和正确的谓语。

× Made me is hard to miss them. I think could they

✓ They are hard to miss. I think so.

原句语序和结构混乱：'Made me is hard to miss them' 非常不合语法，应改为主语在前的完整句 'They are hard to miss'；'I think could they' 应为简洁的肯定句 'I think so' 或 'I think they are effective'。建议使用简单句并保持语序主谓宾。

× I think it depends on situations.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

depends on 后应接单数名词短语 the situation 或复数 situations 也可，但更自然的是 'the situation' 或 'the situation/circumstances'。注意冠词使用和固定搭配。

× If advertisement is beneficial to people, I think it's very good new such as shopping advertisement or for the advertisement,

✓ If an advertisement is beneficial to people, I think it's very good news, such as a shopping advertisement;

原句中 article（冠词）缺失，'advertisement' 作为可数名词需要不定冠词 an；'very good new' 应为 good news（不可数名词）；句子冗长且结构混乱。建议注意可数/不可数名词和正确短语。

× but if the advertisement is harmful for us is not suitable for people.

✓ but if an advertisement is harmful to us, it is not suitable for people.

原句缺少连接词和主语谓语对应：需要逗号分隔从句并补充主句 'it is'；介词用 harmful to 而非 harmful for。注意完整句子结构和适当介词。

× I like shopping and food advertisements because I think the advertisement is very accurate and effective for me if I want to choose delicious foods or beautiful clothes, I can watch this advertisement and to do

✓ I like shopping and food advertisements because I think they are accurate and effective for me. If I want to choose delicious food or pretty clothes, I can watch these advertisements and decide.

原句过长且时态、代词和并列结构混乱：shopping and food advertisements 应用复数代词 they；'delicious foods' 更常用 food（不可数）或 plural if referring to types；短句尾部 'and to do' 未完成，应改为完整动词 decide 或 make a choice。建议拆分为两句，保持代词一致和完成谓语。