Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, use present simple consistently, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I see advertisements on my phone and computer very often. For example, social media apps like Instagram and YouTube show short video ads between posts, which companies use to earn revenue. Because of this, I usually use ad-blockers or skip ads when possible.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer and a brief explanation. If you do not remember, say so clearly and give a short reason or an example of the type of ad you might have seen. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition.

Example: I don't remember any specific advertisement from my childhood. My mother rarely allowed me to watch TV, so I saw very few commercials. As a result, I have no strong memories of childhood adverts.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence and use correct verb forms. Give a specific example and use linking words (for example, for instance) to make your point clearer. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transport. For instance, subways usually have posters next to the windows promoting hospitals, public health campaigns, or local services. These ads are common because they reach many commuters.

Suggestion: Give a concise opinion with one or two clear reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid long pauses and incomplete sentences. Use correct pronouns and simplify where needed.

Example: I don't really like advertisements because they often interrupt videos on YouTube or social media. Because these ads break my concentration, I usually skip them when possible.

Suggestion: Directly state the type you prefer and explain why with a specific detail. Use linking words and correct phrasing, and avoid repeating previous answers without adding information.

Example: I prefer short, non-intrusive ads, such as brief banners or six-second video ads, because they do not interrupt my viewing experience. If an ad is clearly labeled and quick, I'm more likely to tolerate it.

× Umm, definitely, I often saw advertisements when I scrolling my phone, just scrolling my phone or you while using computer, especially on social media as there there's lots of ads and because it's helps earn a lot of money and help to.

✓ Umm, definitely, I often saw advertisements when I was scrolling my phone or using my computer, especially on social media, because there are lots of ads and they help earn a lot of money.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and tense consistency. 'I scrolling' is missing auxiliary 'was' for past continuous; 'you while using computer' is unnecessary and unclear; 'there there's' is redundant; 'it's helps' mixes singular contraction with a plural verb. Suggestion: use 'was scrolling' for past continuous, remove extraneous words, use 'there are' for plural 'ads' and 'they help' to agree with plural subject. Grammar problem type ID:5

× When I was young, I my mom judging judging me to watching television or computer. So I don't really Remember Remember it and and I don't know very about advertisement and when I were when I was cha child, so.

✓ When I was young, my mom would forbid me from watching television or using the computer, so I don't really remember the advertisements from then.

Errors: incorrect verb choices and tense/structure. 'I my mom judging judging me to watching' is ungrammatical; 'forbid' or 'would forbid' expresses habitual past; 'remember' should not be capitalized or repeated; 'when I were' is wrong verb form. Suggestion: use 'my mom would forbid me from...' or 'my mom didn't allow me to...', remove repetitions, and use correct past tense forms. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I can saw a lot of advertisement on subway, umm, especially beside of the windows. And there's a lot of like hospital hospitals or like government policies about about that. And there's quite often, often see.

✓ I can see a lot of advertisements on the subway, especially beside the windows. There are many ads about hospitals or government policies, and I see them quite often.

Errors: mixed tense and pluralization. 'I can saw' mixes present modal with past 'saw' — use 'can see' or 'see'; 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'beside of the windows' should be 'beside the windows' or 'next to the windows'; 'there's a lot of like hospital hospitals' is repetitive and pluralization wrong; 'there's quite often, often see' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use present tense 'can see'/'see', correct plurals, and simplify phrases. Grammar problem type ID:6

× To be honest, I don't really like it 'cause it sometimes when I you and I'm watching Youtubes like videos and social media and they just pop on some advertisements like we can skip it and we should see like limited time and it's. So it's sometimes interrupts me to focus on that video so I.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like them because sometimes when I'm watching videos on YouTube or social media, advertisements pop up; we can skip them, but they appear for a short time and sometimes interrupt my focus on the video.

Errors: pronoun and subject-verb agreement and sentence fragments. 'I don't really like it' should be 'them' (plural 'ads'); 'when I you and I'm watching' is confused pronouns; 'Youtubes like videos' incorrect noun order; 'we should see like limited time' unclear phrase; 'it's sometimes interrupts me' mixes subject and verb forms. Suggestion: use 'them' for plural ads, 'I'm watching videos on YouTube', and 'interrupt my focus'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× As I mentioned last question, I don't like advertisements to interrupt me so I like the time short time 1 cause it's.

✓ As I mentioned in the last answer, I don't like advertisements interrupting me, so I prefer very short ads.

Errors: awkward structure and incomplete sentence. 'As I mentioned last question' needs preposition 'in the'; 'I don't like advertisements to interrupt me' is grammatically acceptable but more natural as 'ads interrupting me'; 'I like the time short time 1 cause it's.' is incomplete and unclear. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I prefer very short ads' and ensure full sentence expressing the reason.