Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and directly answer first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use a clear past-tense statement and a simple reason or short example.

Example: I don't remember any particular advertisement from my childhood. I usually paid attention to TV shows rather than commercials, so I rarely noticed ads.

Suggestion: Answer directly about transport advertising, then give a specific contrasting example (car vs public transport) and use linking words for clarity. Avoid unrelated details and correct vocabulary (e.g. 'transport' not 'transphones').

Example: Not really; I rarely use trains or buses, so I don't see much public-transport advertising. I usually travel by car and listen to music on Spotify, where I occasionally hear audio ads.

Suggestion: State your opinion clearly, then give two concise reasons with examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'make us fool' — instead explain how ads can be misleading. Reduce filler words and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Example: No, I don't like advertisements. I find many ads misleading because they exaggerate product benefits, and they interrupt what I'm doing, which wastes time.

Suggestion: Answer directly and, if possible, describe a type you would tolerate (e.g., informative ads). Use clear language to explain why you dislike most ads and give a brief specific example of poor advertising practices.

Example: I generally dislike most advertisements because they often lack clear, accurate information. However, I appreciate short, informative ads that explain a product's features without exaggeration.

Suggestion: Give a direct present-tense response, then explain habits with specific tools (ad blockers, skipping). Use one linking word to connect idea and avoid repeated fillers.

Example: Not often. I usually skip or close ads when I'm on my phone or computer, and I also use an ad blocker, so I rarely watch online advertisements.

× No, I did not remember any advertisement, uh, when, when I was kid, Uh, I do not, uh, I did not pay uh, much attention to the advertisement.

✓ No, I did not remember any advertisements when I was a kid. I did not pay much attention to advertisements.

Mixed and inconsistent tense usage and incorrect articles/plural. Use past simple consistently for past events: 'did not remember' and 'did not pay' are correct, but 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match general reference and 'a kid' requires the article 'a'. Also remove verbal fillers and repetitions for clarity.

× Uh, I, I, I had only interest in watching show.

✓ I only had an interest in watching shows.

Incorrect noun forms and article use: 'had only interest' should be 'had an interest'. 'Watching show' needs plural 'shows' or 'watching shows', and word order should be 'I only had an interest'. This keeps past tense consistent.

× Well, I do not travel a lot from the trains and other transphones.

✓ Well, I do not travel a lot by train or other public transport.

Incorrect preposition and word choice: use 'by' for modes of transport and 'train' (singular) or 'trains' depending on context; 'transphones' is incorrect; use 'public transport' or 'other public transportation'.

× Yes, I always travel in a car, so we usually listen songs.

✓ Yes, I always travel by car, so we usually listen to songs.

Incorrect preposition and verb pattern: use 'by car' for mode of transport and 'listen to' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. 'Songs' is fine plural.

× Yes, when I use Spotify we have to listen advertisement.

✓ Yes, when I use Spotify we have to listen to advertisements.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' and 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' for general reference. Maintain present tense 'use' and 'have to'.

× No, I do not like advertisement because it's, uh, it's, it's the waste of time.

✓ No, I do not like advertisements because they are a waste of time.

Count noun and article errors: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' or 'an advertisement'. 'It's the waste of time' is unnatural; use 'they are a waste of time' for general statement.

× Uh, it make us fool, uh, because advertisement, uh, uh, give us a wrong, uh, information about the product.

✓ It makes us look foolish because advertisements give us wrong information about a product.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'it make' should be 'it makes'. 'Make us fool' is incorrect; use 'make us look foolish' or 'fool us'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' or 'an advertisement' and 'wrong information' not 'a wrong information' (information is uncountable), 'about the product' can be 'about a product' for generality.

× Uh, so some people uh, make fool, uh, from the advertisement.

✓ So some people are fooled by advertisements.

Incorrect verb structure and preposition: 'make fool' is incorrect; passive 'are fooled' or 'get fooled' is appropriate. Use 'by advertisements' for the agent.

× I do not like any type of advertisement. Uh, it's a, uh, it's a waste of time or waste of money.

✓ I do not like any type of advertisement. It is a waste of time and money.

Redundancy and article use: 'a waste of time or waste of money' is awkward; compress to 'a waste of time and money'. Also keep 'advertisement' singular is acceptable with 'any type of' but could be 'advertisements'.

× Uh, uh, through the advertisement, uh, we, uh, we made fool because there is a no clear information and uh, correct information.

✓ Through advertisements, we were fooled because there was no clear or correct information.

Tense and article errors: use past passive 'were fooled' to describe being deceived in the past. 'There is a no clear information' is wrong: say 'there was no clear or correct information' and 'information' is uncountable so no article 'a'.

× No, I didn't. I do not see advertisement when I using phone or computer.

✓ No, I didn't. I do not see advertisements when I am using my phone or computer.

Mixed tense and verb form errors: 'when I using' requires 'when I am using' or 'when I use'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'Phone' should be 'my phone' for clarity.

× I skip that time when I see advertisement uh, because I, uh, because I, uh, because it's a waste of time uh, so I do not watch any advertisement.

✓ I skip them when I see advertisements because they are a waste of time, so I do not watch any advertisements.

Pronoun and number agreement and article use: 'skip that time' is awkward; use 'skip them' referring to ads. 'See advertisement' should be 'see advertisements'. Use plural pronouns 'they' and plural 'advertisements' consistently.