Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), use past tense consistently, and give one or two specific details (what made it memorable). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. A shampoo commercial impressed me when I was a child because it told a short love story. The actor was very famous at that time, and the emotional music and romantic plot made the advert unforgettable.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'seat backs' or 'inside trains') and simple sentence structures. Explain briefly where adverts are placed and why they are noticeable, using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Example: Yes, I see many adverts on trains. For example, companies place posters on seat backs and panels above the doors, so passengers notice them easily during the journey.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and precise. Start with a clear opinion then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and fillers; use linking words like 'for example' and 'because'.

Example: I like some advertisements, but it depends on their quality. For example, I enjoy Thai adverts because they are emotionally powerful and well-produced, so they stay in my memory.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and explain what you mean by 'humor' and 'smart' adverts with a brief reason or example. Avoid fillers and unclear words like 'humans smarts'.

Example: I prefer funny and clever adverts because humor grabs attention and clever ideas make products memorable. For instance, a short humorous skit can make me remember a brand for weeks.

Suggestion: Answer directly and refine grammar. Say whether you personally see or interact with ads, then give a brief reason and an example. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing.

Example: I usually skip video ads on my phone because they interrupt what I'm doing. However, many people watch live streams, and influencers often promote products during those broadcasts.

× Yes, I still remember an advertisement now, uh, it's talk about uh, it's about shampoo advertisement.

✓ Yes, I still remember an advertisement from my childhood; it's about a shampoo.

The original uses 'it's talk about' which is ungrammatical. This is an issue with verb forms and sentence structure: 'talk about' needs an appropriate verb form (is talking about) or a simpler noun phrase. Also 'now' conflicts with 'when you were a child' so 'from my childhood' is clearer. Suggest using 'it's about' or 'it is about' and reduce fillers. Suggestion: Use 'it's about' + noun phrase or 'it was about' if emphasizing past context.

× Umm, the actor is very famous in that time Uh, I remember it because it's a talk about love story so.

✓ The actor was very famous at that time, and I remember it because it was about a love story.

Two issues: tense and preposition/adjective use. 'is very famous in that time' should be past tense 'was' and the correct preposition is 'at that time'. 'it's a talk about love story' is ungrammatical; use 'it was about a love story'. Suggest keeping consistent past tense for past memories and use 'at that time' and 'about a love story'.

× Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains such as they put the advertising on the seed banks.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains; for example, they put advertisements on seat backs.

The phrase 'seed banks' is likely a mispronunciation; the correct noun is 'seat backs'. Also 'advertising' vs 'advertisements' — plural noun fits. Use 'for example' to introduce the instance. Ensure correct vocabulary and noun pluralization.

× When you see set you can see the advertising straightly and the transport like.

✓ When you sit, you can see the advertisements clearly, and the same applies to other transport.

'see set' should be 'sit'; 'straightly' is not idiomatic—use 'clearly'. 'and the transport like' is incomplete; rephrase to 'the same applies to other transport'. Suggest using clear adverbs like 'clearly' and complete comparative phrases.

× I think it depends on the quality of advertisements.

✓ I think it depends on the quality of the advertisements.

Minor article/quantifier issue: adding 'the' makes the noun phrase specific. 'quality of advertisements' is acceptable, but in context 'the advertisements' is more natural. Suggest adding definite article when referring to advertisements in general context here.

× Uh, for example, I'm very enjoy the uh, Thai, uh, advertisement because they made it very impressive, impressive and uh, umm, appear to me.

✓ For example, I really enjoy Thai advertisements because they make them very impressive and memorable to me.

'I'm very enjoy' is incorrect; use 'I really enjoy' (verb + object). 'they made it' should be present simple 'they make them' when referring to typical characteristic. 'appear to me' is awkward; 'memorable to me' or 'stick in my mind' is better. Suggest correct verb forms and use consistent present tense for general truths.

× Most of my favorite advertising is, uh, interesting and full of humor.

✓ Most of my favorite advertisements are interesting and full of humour.

'Most of my favorite advertising is' mixes countable/uncountable forms. Use plural 'advertisements' and plural verb 'are'. 'humor' spelling can be 'humour' or 'humor' depending on variety; retain consistent spelling. Suggest matching noun plurality with verb agreement.

× I think, uh, that kind of advertising is, uh, very, uh, full of, uh, humans, uh, smarts.

✓ I think that kind of advertisement is very clever and full of humour.

Original has incorrect word choices: 'humans smarts' is ungrammatical. Use adjectives like 'clever' and noun 'humour' or 'humor'. Also ensure singular 'that kind of advertisement' with singular verb. Suggest replacing awkward fillers and choosing correct collocations: 'full of humour' or 'very clever'.

× Actually I always skip it when I on my phone, but I many people like to watch live streaming on their phone.

✓ Actually I always skip them when I am on my phone, but many people like to watch live streams on their phones.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary 'am' in 'when I am on my phone'. 'it' should match plural 'advertisements' -> 'them'. 'I many people' is incorrect; remove 'I'. 'live streaming' as noun should be 'live streams' or 'live streaming videos'. Also pluralize 'phone' as 'phones' when speaking generally. Suggest using proper auxiliary verbs and plural forms.

× I think live streaming is another kind of prom promote product.

✓ I think live streaming is another way to promote products.

The phrase 'prom promote product' is garbled. Use 'a way to promote products' or 'a form of product promotion'. Suggest simplifying to 'another way to promote products' and use plural 'products' or 'a product' depending on context.