Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (what the ad showed, why it impressed you). Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" correctly.

Example: When I was a child, one clothing advertisement impressed me the most because it showed many colorful Adidas shoes. For example, the ad had bright images and upbeat music that made the shoes look exciting, and I remember the brand logo clearly. Because of that ad, I wanted those shoes and asked my parents about them.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add one clear supporting detail. Correct grammar (use present simple: "I see"), avoid irrelevant details, and use a linking word like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and other transport. For example, when I travel with my parents I notice large posters for Adidas shoes with colorful designs and catchy music, which makes the ads memorable.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use correct verb forms ("give" → "gives"), plural/singular agreement, and avoid repeating words. Limit to 2–3 supporting points with linking words like "because" and "for example".

Example: Yes, I like advertisements because they give me information about new products and help me decide what to buy. For example, colorful ads for shoes show styles and prices, which makes me more confident when I go shopping.

Suggestion: Start with a topic sentence naming the type of ads, then give specific brands or reasons and a short example of action. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example".

Example: I prefer shoe advertisements, especially for brands like Nike and Jordan, because they show attractive colors and designs. For example, after seeing a recent TV ad for Jordan shoes, I visited a nearby store and bought a pair.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use present simple for habitual actions ("I often see"). Be specific about platforms and behavior, and avoid unnecessary filler words. Use linking phrases "for example" and a brief consequence to show effect.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone because I use Instagram and other social media every day. For example, while scrolling I frequently encounter bright shoe ads, and sometimes I buy a pair because the design looks stylish.

× Yes, in childhood advertisement, I see a lot of advertisement, but I still Remember Remember clothing advertisement is very important because he is my memorial.

✓ Yes, in my childhood there were a lot of advertisements, but I still remember a clothing advertisement that is very important to me because it is memorable.

Singular/plural errors: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when referring to many; 'Remember Remember' is redundant and incorrect capitalization; 'he' incorrectly refers to an advertisement and should be 'it'; 'memorial' is the wrong word — use 'memorable' or 'important to me'. Also 'in childhood' is more natural as 'in my childhood'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and pronouns, and choose appropriate adjectives (memorable).

× A lot of Adidas shoes are on the on this advertisement that will explain explain the lot of things for example.

✓ Many Adidas shoes are in this advertisement, which explains a lot of things, for example.

Preposition and article issues: say 'in this advertisement' rather than 'on the on this advertisement'. 'A lot of' can be replaced with 'many' before a countable noun. Also remove repeated words 'explain explain'. Use a relative clause 'which explains' to link ideas. Suggestion: simplify and remove duplicates, choose correct preposition 'in'.

× Yes Sir I will see advertisement on train app with going to with my parents advertisement on the shoes because their shoes is very colorful and the music is also very good lyrics is very very nice.

✓ Yes Sir, I saw advertisements on the train while going with my parents. The shoe advertisements were very colorful, and the music and lyrics were very nice.

Tense and subject-verb errors: 'I will see' is inappropriate for a past habitual observation — use 'I saw' or 'I used to see'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'Their shoes is' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'shoes were' or 'their shoes were'. 'Lyrics is' should be 'lyrics were'. Suggestion: match past tense and plural agreements when describing past experiences.

× The singer is Amarinder girl.

✓ The singer is a girl named Amarinder.

Pronoun/noun phrase order and article: 'Amarinder girl' is unclear. Use 'a girl named Amarinder' or 'a singer called Amarinder'. Include the article 'a' and move name after 'named' to be clear. Suggestion: use 'named' or 'called' to introduce unknown names and include articles.

× So I will see in a trainer with the shoes advertise Adidas so.

✓ So I saw an advertisement for Adidas shoes on a train.

Multiple issues simplified: 'trainer' likely meant 'train'; 'advertise' used incorrectly — use 'advertisement' or 'ad'; word order and tense adjusted to past 'saw'. Use singular 'an advertisement' for one ad or plural if many. Suggestion: use accurate vocabulary ('train', 'advertisement') and correct tense.

× Yes Sir, I like advertisement because it give me a lot of knowledge and confidence to meet the other peoples and how to purchase the things.

✓ Yes Sir, I like advertisements because they give me a lot of knowledge and confidence to meet other people and to know how to purchase things.

Modal/verb agreement and pluralization: 'it give' should be 'they give' because 'advertisements' plural. 'Peoples' is incorrect — use 'people' (uncountable plural). 'How to purchase the things' better as 'how to purchase things' or 'how to buy things'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct plural forms; use infinitive 'to know how to' for purpose.

× Advertisement ad give me a lot of lot of things that I will see in the colorful music and colorful colors and shoes.

✓ Advertisements give me many things: colorful music, bright colors, and attractive shoes.

Awkward adjective/adverb usage and repetition: 'a lot of lot of' is repetitive; 'colorful music' is odd but acceptable if intended — streamline listing with commas. Use 'many' or 'a lot of' once. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use simpler lists.

× So that's why advertisement is important and I I can also.

✓ So that's why advertisements are important, and I can also benefit from them.

Incomplete sentence and repetition: 'I I can also.' is unfinished and repeats 'I'. Use plural 'advertisements are' for agreement and complete the thought ('benefit from them'). Suggestion: finish sentences and avoid repetition.

× I always like the shoes advertisement because I like shoes because they give me a lot of good colors like Nike and Jordan shoes because I like it very so recently I will see the ad in the TV.

✓ I always like shoe advertisements because they show many attractive colors, like Nike and Jordan shoes. Recently I saw the ad on TV.

Preposition and article issues: 'the shoes advertisement' should be 'shoe advertisements' or 'the shoe advertisement'. 'I like it very so' is ungrammatical; use 'I like them a lot'. 'in the TV' should be 'on TV'. Use past tense 'saw' for a completed action. Suggestion: use correct noun modifiers ('shoe advertisements') and 'on TV'.

× Uh, the ad is on a Jordan shoes. Then I will going to the the showdom and by by this and purchase.

✓ Uh, the ad is for Jordan shoes. Then I went to the showroom and bought them.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'on a Jordan shoes' is wrong preposition and number — use 'for Jordan shoes'. 'I will going' mixes future and gerund — use past 'I went' if describing what happened. 'By by this and purchase' unclear; likely 'bought them' — use correct past tense 'bought'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct verb forms.

× Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer? Uh, yes, I will see the advertisement on your on the phone because I always use the phone in on the Instagram and social media and then I am scrolling the real ad is coming of the shoes and the color is very bright.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone because I always use Instagram and other social media. While I am scrolling, ads for shoes appear and the colors are very bright.

Tense and pronoun errors: 'I will see' wrong modal for habitual action — use present simple 'I often see'. 'your on the phone' wrong pronoun; use 'my phone'. 'in on the Instagram' should be 'on Instagram'. 'the real ad is coming of the shoes' is ungrammatical — use 'ads for shoes appear'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, correct possessive pronouns, and preposition 'on' for platforms.

× Then I will purchase them because it gave me a good and stylish color.

✓ Then I will purchase them because they have good and stylish colors.

Pronoun and tense agreement: 'it gave me' is wrong when referring to shoes (plural) — use 'they have' or 'they give me'. If intent is future purchase, keep 'will purchase' and use present/future for reason: 'because they have good and stylish colors'. Suggestion: match pronoun number and keep consistent tense.

× So that's why I prefer to advertisement.

✓ So that's why I prefer advertisements.

Preposition/article error: 'prefer to advertisement' is incorrect structure. Use 'prefer advertisements' or 'prefer watching advertisements'. If comparing, use 'prefer X to Y'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' directly with noun or 'prefer to' with verb infinitive.