Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: give one direct topic sentence naming the advertisement, then add one or two specific details (what it showed, why it impressed you). Use correct grammar (past tense) and avoid filler sounds. Keep to 2–3 sentences and link ideas (e.g., "because" or "so").

Example: When I was a child, the TV advertisement for a kids' toy impressed me the most. It showed colorful characters and catchy music, so I wanted the toy immediately because it looked fun and popular among my friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear example with correct nouns and simple linking words. State frequency or extent, then specify where and how advertisements appear (e.g., on trains, stations, seats). Use simple, accurate vocabulary and check place names or terms.

Example: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport in Bangkok. For example, many BTS trains and station platforms are covered with posters and digital screens, so advertisements are very noticeable during my commute.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then explain reasons with precise words. Replace vague or incorrect words like "impaired" or "attack" with "influential" or "persuasive." Use linking words ("because", "so") and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I do. I find advertisements very persuasive because they highlight product features and can inspire me to try new things, so I sometimes buy items I see in ads.

Suggestion: Give one clear category as a topic sentence (e.g., beauty or tech ads), then give specific reasons and an example. Use accurate vocabulary ("skincare", "cosmetics", "celebrity endorsements"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and link ideas with "because" or "for example."

Example: I prefer advertisements for skincare and cosmetics because they show product benefits and often feature celebrity endorsements. For example, a makeup ad demonstrating before-and-after results helps me decide whether to try the product.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and give frequency (e.g., "often", "always"), then describe typical formats (pop-ups, banners, sponsored posts). Use correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Link ideas with "for example" or "such as."

Example: Yes, definitely. I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer, especially as pop-up videos and sponsored posts on social media, which appear while I scroll through apps.

× Well, I not remember much.

✓ Well, I do not remember much.

Missing auxiliary 'do' for the negative in simple present. Use 'do not' + base verb for negation: 'I do not remember' instead of 'I not remember'. Suggestion: use 'I do not' or contraction 'I don't'. Use simple present to talk about general memory.

× Uh, let me think when I was a child, I, uh, the advice, the advertisement that me that made me impatient is about the neck and.

✓ Uh, let me think. When I was a child, the advertisement that made me impatient was about snacks.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Use past tense 'was' to match 'when I was a child' and a clear subject-verb structure: 'the advertisement that made me impatient was about...'. 'Me that made me' is redundant. 'Neck and' is likely a misheard word; replaced with 'snacks' as a plausible product — if different, substitute correct noun. Suggestion: keep simple relative clause: 'the advertisement that made me impatient was about + noun.' Note: this addresses sentence structure and past tense consistency.

× Yes I do. In Bangkok is many advertisement on 10 or transport.

✓ Yes, I do. In Bangkok there are many advertisements on trains and other transport.

Incorrect use of 'is' with plural 'advertisement' and wrong article/number. Use existential 'there are' for plural: 'there are many advertisements'. Also pluralize 'advertisement' to 'advertisements' and use 'trains' instead of '10' which seems mis-typed. Suggestion: 'In Bangkok there are many advertisements on trains and other forms of transport.'

× For example on BBT BT8BT8 transport is half advert.

✓ For example, on buses and the BTS Skytrain many of the surfaces are covered with advertisements.

Original contains unclear names and wrong structure 'is half advert'. Use plural nouns and explain proportion: 'many of the surfaces are covered with advertisements.' Use 'on' for transport surfaces. Suggestion: be specific: 'on buses' or 'on the skytrain' and use 'covered with advertisements'.

× Yes, I do. I interested, I interested in an advertisement because it's very impaired and attack me when I want to buy something, it's really attack me and and inspire me.

✓ Yes, I do. I am interested in advertisements because they have a strong effect on me when I want to buy something; they attract and inspire me.

Missing verb 'am' after subject 'I' (be-verb). 'An advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally. 'Impaired' is incorrect word choice; use 'have a strong effect' or 'are very effective.' 'Attack me' is unnatural; use 'grab my attention' or 'attract me.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they attract and inspire me.' Suggestion: use 'I am interested in advertisements' and 'they attract/inspire me.'

× Well, I really enjoy about advertising about second care or makeup because, umm, Internet thing in cosmetic and, uh, beauty, uh, many celebrity is beautiful. It very.

✓ Well, I really enjoy advertisements about skincare or makeup because on the internet there are many beauty and cosmetic posts featuring celebrities who look beautiful.

Awkward phrasing 'enjoy about advertising' should be 'enjoy advertisements about.' 'Second care' is likely 'skincare.' Use 'on the internet there are' to introduce existence. 'Many celebrity is beautiful' has subject-verb agreement errors and pluralization: use 'many celebrities are beautiful.' 'It very.' is incomplete; replace with a complete clause. Suggestion: use clear nouns 'skincare', 'makeup', and complete sentences: 'I enjoy advertisements about skincare or makeup because...'.

× It very.

✓ They are very appealing.

Fragment 'It very.' lacks verb and unclear subject. Use plural subject 'they' to refer to advertisements and complete predicate 'are very appealing.' Suggestion: complete sentences with subject + verb + complement.

× Yes, definitely. Uh, when I when I call my phone and use social media is may it had a lot advertisement pop up and I sometime is.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I use my phone and browse social media, many advertisements pop up and sometimes I click on them.

'Call my phone' is incorrect for using phone; use 'use my phone.' Word order and auxiliary verbs are wrong: 'is may it had a lot advertisement pop up' is ungrammatical. Use present simple for habitual action: 'many advertisements pop up.' 'I sometime is' is incomplete — likely 'sometimes I click them' or 'sometimes I see them.' Suggestion: say 'many advertisements pop up and sometimes I click on them.'