Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tenses, countable/uncountable nouns), and avoid redundancy. Add one brief supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'so' or 'because').

Example: I usually can't remember my dreams. Because I wake up quickly, the details fade, so I rarely recall any scenes.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then expand with a reason using linking words. Fix grammar (prepositions, verb forms) and be specific about what you find exciting.

Example: I rarely share my own dreams because I can't remember them. However, I'm very interested in other people's dreams because they can be imaginative and reveal personal feelings.

Suggestion: Answer directly and support with a clearer reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repetitive wording.

Example: I don't think dreams always have special meanings because they often reflect recent activities. For example, if you study a lot, you might dream about books, which is more about habit than symbolism.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct conditional and noun/phrase forms, and add a brief realistic example or plan. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to make positive dreams come true if they are realistic. For instance, dreaming of being very successful motivates me to work harder toward a high-paying career.

× I don't know why but every time when I dreams I cannot remember anythings.

✓ I don't know why, but every time I dream I cannot remember anything.

Error: 'every time when I dreams' contains unnecessary 'when' and wrong verb form 'dreams' with 'I', causing subject-verb agreement and sentence structure problems; 'anythings' is incorrect plural. Suggestion: Remove 'when', use base verb 'dream' with subject 'I', and use 'anything' (uncountable) for negative sentences. Add a comma after 'why' for clarity.

× I cannot remember my dream so I cannot share my dreams to other, but I often interested in other people dreams.

✓ I cannot remember my dreams so I cannot share them with others, but I am often interested in other people's dreams.

Error: 'share ... to other' uses wrong preposition; use 'share with'. 'Interested' needs 'be' verb: 'am interested'. 'other people dreams' needs possessive: 'other people's dreams'. Also keep plural 'dreams' consistent. Suggestion: Use 'share with', include appropriate form of 'be', and use possessive for noun phrases.

× I cannot remember my dream so I cannot share my dreams to other, but I often interested in other people dreams.

✓ I cannot remember my dreams so I cannot share them with others, but I am often interested in other people's dreams.

Error: 'often interested' lacks auxiliary verb; 'interested' is an adjective that requires 'be' (am/is/are). Suggestion: Use 'I am often interested' to form correct adjective usage.

× Some story is very fantastic.

✓ Some stories are very fantastic.

Error: 'Some story' mixes plural sense with singular noun; 'is' should agree with noun. Use plural 'stories' with 'are' for general statements. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to unspecified multiple stories.

× For me, I don't think so. This is because I think if you do some things more frequently so you might keep it on your dreams.

✓ For me, I don't think so. This is because if you do some things more frequently, you might keep seeing them in your dreams.

Error: Redundant 'so' and awkward phrasing 'keep it on your dreams'. Use 'keep seeing them in your dreams' to express repeated appearance. Also remove unnecessary 'this is because' repetition. Suggestion: Use clear conditional structure and correct verb collocation 'see in dreams'.

× If it's a good dream, I would like to make it come true.

✓ If it's a good dream, I would like to make it come true.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as a hypothetical preference. No change needed. Explanation: 'Would like' correctly expresses desire in hypothetical context; keep present conditional structure.

× For example, if I dreams I am a richest in the world so I would like to be that that.

✓ For example, if I dream I were the richest person in the world, I would like to be that.

Error: 'dreams' should be 'dream' after 'I' (subject-verb agreement). 'a richest' is incorrect article and form; use 'the richest' and add 'person' for clarity. Also use subjunctive 'were' or keep 'dream I am' awkward; better: 'if I dream that I were the richest person in the world'. Remove duplicate 'that'. Suggestion: Use correct verb form, definite article 'the' with superlatives, and include the noun 'person'.