Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Mejorar la claridad y la estructura de la respuesta. Empieza con una oración directa que responda la pregunta (sí/no y por qué), luego añade una o dos frases de apoyo con detalles específicos y usa conectores para que sea coherente. Evita frases confusas y repeticiones. Practica formas naturales como “I usually remember my dreams, especially nightmares, because…”.

Example: Yes, I usually remember my dreams, especially the nightmares, because they feel very real and stick in my mind all day. For example, after a bad dream I often think about the details at work and it affects my mood.

Suggestion: Organiza la respuesta: comienza con una oración clara (sí/no), explica cuándo y con quién compartes sueños y añade un ejemplo concreto. Usa conectores como “usually”, “sometimes”, “for example”. Evita errores gramaticales en tiempo y orden de las palabras. Practica frases como “I sometimes tell close friends about my dreams, especially if they are unusual.”

Example: Sometimes I share my dreams, usually with close friends when we are talking casually. For example, if I’ve had a strange dream after drinking I might describe it and say how it made me feel.

Suggestion: Dar una respuesta más desarrollada y organizada. Responde claramente, luego explica por qué y cómo pruebas esa idea (por ejemplo, buscas interpretaciones en Internet). Usa vocabulario adecuado (“look up” en lugar de “look out”) y conecta ideas con palabras como “because” o “so”.

Example: Yes, I believe dreams can have meanings because they reflect our emotions and experiences. For instance, I often look up dream interpretations online to see if a recurring dream relates to stress or personal concerns.

Suggestion: Responde directamente y añade specificidad sobre qué tipo of dreams you want to realize and how you work towards them. Use clear present tenses and avoid awkward phrases like “dream on when I'm awake.” Mention concrete actions to show commitment. Use connectors like “however” or “for example.”

Example: Not all dreams, but I want to make my positive goals come true, such as becoming fluent in English or traveling abroad. For example, I study every day and save money so I can move closer to achieving those goals.

× I think in the face of the dream and the night that I have that, but I usually remember the dreams that I have, of course, the nightmares or the most horrible dreams I can have.

✓ I think about the dreams I have at night, and I usually remember them, especially nightmares or the most horrible dreams.

The original sentence uses awkward phrasing and incorrect prepositions ('in the face of') and inconsistent tense/structure. Use present simple 'I think about' and 'I have at night' for habits, and replace redundant clauses with 'I usually remember them', specifying 'especially nightmares'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'think about' for considering something and 'have' with 'at night' for clarity.

× Because you remember and you think it's true all the day.

✓ Because you remember them and think they are true all day.

Original mixes second person 'you' with unclear reference and uses 'all the day' which is non-native; use 'all day'. Keep subject consistent and use 'they are true' to refer to dreams. Suggestion: use 'them' to refer to 'dreams' and 'all day' for duration.

× Well, I've been pet sometimes when I drink with a particular person.

✓ Well, I've been tipsy sometimes when I drink with a particular person.

'Been pet' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'been tipsy' or 'been drunk'. Use 'I've been tipsy' (present perfect) to express experience up to now. Suggestion: choose correct adjective for state after drinking and use present perfect for experiences.

× I told that person what did I dream so I can explain what feel and also tell them what was the the dream about it.

✓ I told that person what I had dreamed so I could explain how I felt and describe what the dream was about.

Original uses incorrect word order for reported speech ('what did I dream') and wrong verb forms ('what feel'). Use past perfect or past simple 'I had dreamed' or 'I dreamed' in reported speech and 'how I felt' for past emotion. Also remove redundant 'it'. Suggestion: in reported speech use statement order and match tense sequence.

× But I let you know others dream too.

✓ But I also tell others about their dreams.

Original has wrong verb 'let you know' and wrong possessive 'others dream'. Use 'tell others about their dreams' or 'let others know about dreams'. Ensure correct plural possessive 'others' + 'dreams'. Suggestion: use 'tell someone about something' structure.

× Yeah, of course. I usually look out my dreams on Internet when I've been there half a special meaning that I have to know even if it's a nightmare or a beautiful dream.

✓ Yeah, of course. I usually look up my dreams on the Internet when I think they have some special meaning, whether it's a nightmare or a beautiful dream.

Problems: 'look out' should be 'look up' (phrasal verb), 'on Internet' needs article 'on the Internet', and tenses/phrasing 'when I've been there half a special meaning' is incorrect. Use 'when I think they have some special meaning'. Suggestion: use 'look up' for searching online and 'the Internet' with article; use 'whether' to show alternatives.

× Not all of them, but if I have a beautiful dream that I actually dream on when I'm awake, of course I would like to make it come true.

✓ Not all of them, but if I have a beautiful dream that I actually imagine when I'm awake, of course I would like to make it come true.

'Dream on when I'm awake' is awkward; replace with 'imagine' or 'daydream'. 'Dream' as a noun is fine but 'dream on' is incorrect. Keep conditional 'would like' appropriate. Suggestion: use 'imagine' or 'daydream' to describe waking fantasies.

× And I work every day often on it so.

✓ And I often work on it every day.

Word order is awkward; place adverb 'often' before the main verb or before frequency phrase: 'often work on it every day'. Remove trailing 'so'. Suggestion: follow natural adverb placement rules: frequency adverbs before main verb.