Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid filler sounds like 'umm'. Also correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., 'I don't usually remember my dreams' and 'I probably remember them if they are very scary or happy').

Example: I don't usually remember my dreams. However, if a dream is extremely scary or very happy, I probably remember it because strong emotions make memories more vivid.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details with correct grammar and linking words. Remove repetition and filler words. Use correct adjective/adverb forms and possessive ('other people's dreams').

Example: Yes, I often share my dreams with close friends. For example, when a dream leaves me excited, I usually text them a short description to convey how it felt, and I also enjoy hearing about other people's dreams because they can be intriguing.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a clear opinion first, then explain with one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid unclear phrases; be precise about whom or what you mean.

Example: I think it depends. Some dreams might reflect our concerns or predict how we feel, because dreams often draw on recent experiences and emotions; however, many dreams are simply products of imagination and have no special meaning.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence and one specific reason with an example. Reduce redundancy (e.g., 'joyful and extremely happy' is repetitive). Use 'realize' or 'make them come true' correctly and smoothly.

Example: Yes, I do want to make some of my dreams come true because many of them involve achievements or happy experiences. For instance, I dream of traveling to a beautiful country, and I'm saving money and planning trips to turn that dream into reality.

× Actually for me, I don't remember the dreams I've had.

✓ Actually, I don't remember my dreams.

The original mixes present simple with present perfect awkwardly. Use present simple 'don't remember' with 'my dreams' for natural expression. Remove 'for me' as redundant and 'I've had' which is unnecessary here.

× But if it's something very scary or happy, probably I will remember it.

✓ But if it's something very scary or very happy, I will probably remember it.

Word order with modal/adverb: place 'probably' after the modal 'will' or before the main verb. Also repeat 'very' for parallel adjectives and remove contraction 'it's' for clarity.

× Yes, of course. Uh, when I'm very very excited, I usually text my friends about my dream to share with them with this feeling and uh, I usually very interested in other people dreams.

✓ Yes, of course. When I'm very excited, I usually text my friends about my dream to share how I feel, and I'm usually very interested in other people's dreams.

Use 'how I feel' instead of 'with this feeling' for natural phrasing. 'I usually very interested' lacks the verb 'am' and needs present simple 'am'. Possessive 'other people's dreams' requires apostrophe-s.

× Only depends I think.

✓ I think it only depends.

Sentence word order is incorrect. Place subject 'I' and verb 'think' before 'it only depends' to form a complete, natural sentence.

× Yes, because people usually can predict something. We are their dreams, but mostly of them just to our part of imagination.

✓ Yes, because people sometimes try to interpret dreams. Dreams can reflect people's thoughts, but mostly they are just part of our imagination.

Original has incorrect pronouns and confusing clauses ('We are their dreams' makes no sense). Clarify meaning: use 'people' and 'dreams' correctly, and 'part of our imagination' is the intended idea. Replace 'usually can predict something' with 'sometimes try to interpret' for accuracy.

× Oh yes, of course, I like to make my dreams come true because most of them are very joyful and extremely happy, so I'd like to make some in reality.

✓ Oh yes, of course. I want to make my dreams come true because most of them are joyful and make me extremely happy, so I'd like to make some of them a reality.

Use 'want' or 'would like' consistently; 'make some in reality' is unnatural—use 'make some of them a reality'. Also change 'are very joyful and extremely happy' to 'are joyful and make me extremely happy' to avoid attributing emotions to dreams awkwardly.