Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, fix grammar (remember vs. remember, dreams not gyms), use correct verb forms and articles, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: I rarely remember my dreams. Usually I wake up and most of the details disappear, so I can only recall a vague feeling or one short scene. For example, I might remember being at school but not what happened there.

Suggestion: Answer directly and explain briefly with a reason and an example. Correct grammar (others' dreams, it's boring), avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'I prefer for cars.' Use linking words (because, so, for example) to connect ideas.

Example: No, I don't usually share dreams because I find the topic boring and not useful. For example, I prefer talking about cars or current events, which feel more interesting and practical to me.

Suggestion: Be coherent and logical: state your view clearly, give a reason, and avoid contradictory language. Fix grammar and word choice (useful vs. meaningless, dreams not gyms). Use linking words (because, therefore) and be specific about why you think so.

Example: I don't think dreams have special meanings because I usually forget most of the details by morning. Therefore it's hard to use them as reliable signs or messages.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly (do you want to make your dreams come true?), then support with a brief personal example and a linking word to show contrast. Correct tense and remove hesitations and repetitions. Keep it within five sentences and end with a clear conclusion about your current intention.

Example: When I was a child I wanted to become a scientist, but as I grew up I realized my skills and interests had changed. Therefore I no longer pursue that dream and now focus on other career goals that suit me better.

× I usually don't remember the gyms I had because when I wake up my brain forget a all things happen in the night.

✓ I usually don't remember the dreams I had because when I wake up my brain forgets all the things that happened during the night.

Multiple issues: 'gyms' is wrong word choice (should be 'dreams') — classified as sentence structure error because word choice disrupts meaning; subject-verb agreement 'my brain forget' requires third person singular 'forgets' (subject-verb agreement / third person singular issue); word order and articles 'a all things' should be 'all the things'; tense consistency — 'happen in the night' should be past 'happened during the night' to match 'I had'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('dreams'), ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'all the' for general plural noun, and match past tense for events that already occurred.

× No, I have no interest in others dreams because I think talking about this topic is a boring. I prefer for cars. I prefer to focus on more useful topics.

✓ No, I have no interest in others' dreams because I think talking about this topic is boring. I prefer cars. I prefer to focus on more useful topics.

Errors: missing possessive apostrophe in 'others dreams' should be 'others\' dreams' (incorrect use of pronouns/possessive); 'is a boring' incorrect article + adjective — 'boring' as adjective does not need 'a'; 'prefer for cars' uses wrong preposition — 'prefer cars' or 'prefer talking about cars' is correct. Suggestion: use possessive form for others, drop unnecessary article before 'boring', and remove 'for' after 'prefer' when followed by a noun.

× No Umm, I usually forget a most of details of gyms during the night. So that I think they are useful.

✓ No, umm, I usually forget most of the details of dreams during the night. So I don't think they are useful.

Problems: 'a most of' should be 'most of the' (article and quantifier misuse) and 'details of gyms' wrong noun 'gyms' should be 'dreams' (word choice) — overall sentence structure errors. Also sentence meaning contradicted previous answer; context suggests they are not useful so correction adjusts to 'I don't think they are useful.' Suggestion: use 'most of the details', correct noun to 'dreams', and ensure logical consistency with earlier statements.

× Umm When I was a child, I dreamed of being a scientist in the future. However, when I grew up I find I found out that umm I I was not good at a.

✓ Umm, when I was a child, I dreamed of being a scientist. However, when I grew up I found out that I was not good at it.

Issues: tense and redundancy — 'dreamed of being a scientist in the future' is redundant; better 'dreamed of being a scientist.' 'I find I found out' mixes present and past; correct past tense is 'I found out.' 'I I was not good at a' contains repetition and missing object; should be 'I was not good at it.' Suggestion: remove redundancy, keep past tense consistent for past events, avoid repeated words, and include the correct pronoun 'it' to refer to the profession.