Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，并保持简洁。可把话分为主题句和补充句，使用正确时态与冠词，避免冗长。比如先说能记得梦境的总体印象，再具体说明关于留学的梦。可在句间使用连接词如“so”或“and”使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I can usually remember my dreams. One of my main dreams is to study at the Royal College of Art for a year to focus on contemporary art practice, and I’ve even received an offer.

Suggestion: 回答可以更具体，说明与谁分享、他们如何支持和具体能提升哪些技能。使用连接词（for example, so, which）使信息更连贯，注意小语法错误如时态和冠词。

Example: Yes, I share my dream with close friends and a few teachers, and they’ve been very supportive. For example, a teacher gave me advice on portfolio preparation, which helped me improve my practical and communication skills.

Suggestion: 表达要更准确、简洁，避免重复和拼写/用词错误（means→meaning）。可以先给直接观点，再用一两句举例或解释。用连接词（because, for instance）让逻辑清晰。

Example: Yes, I think dreams often have special meaning because they reflect our imagination and emotions. For instance, a creative dream might inspire an artwork and give someone a sense of joy.

Suggestion: 回答需更有条理，注意语法和句子衔接。先明确回答，然后交代过去的努力与现在的进展，最后说明未来计划。避免不连贯或重复的短句。

Example: Yes, studying abroad for a year is my biggest dream. I have wanted this since I was a child, and now I’ve received an offer and passed the language test, so I plan to go next year.

× Yes, I remember it.

✓ Yes, I remember them.

原句中“it”用作指代“dreams（复数）”不正确。因为“dreams”是复数，代词应使用“them”。建议将代词与被指代名词的数保持一致。

× I dream to study abroad for one year at Royal College of Art, studying the contemporary art practice and I had an offer from this college.

✓ I dream of studying abroad for one year at the Royal College of Art, studying contemporary art practice, and I have received an offer from that college.

（1）动词“dream”后面常接介词“of”加动名词，故使用“dream of studying”。（2）“study abroad for one year”改为“studying abroad for one year”以匹配动名词结构。 （3）学校名前通常加定冠词“the Royal College of Art”。（4）“studying the contemporary art practice”中定冠词和名词搭配不自然，改为“studying contemporary art practice”。（5）时态：“I had an offer”用现在完成“have received/received”更符合上下文中刚获得录取通知的语境，建议用现在完成时“have received”。所有建议有助于语法和表达更自然。

× Yes, I share it with my close friends and teachers.

✓ Yes, I share them with my close friends and teachers.

“it”错误指代复数“dreams”，应使用复数代词“them”。代词的人称和数要与所指对象一致。

× They also support me to go further.

✓ They also support me in going further.

动词“support”后接表示帮助的动词时常用介词结构“support someone in doing something”或直接用不定式结构“help someone to do something”。这里用“support me in going further”更自然，或改为“help me go further”。

× They think this a good experience to improve my other skills.

✓ They think this is a good experience to improve my other skills.

缺少系动词“is”。此外“other skills”可理解但若想表达“其他技能”是正确的；此处主要错误为漏掉“is”，属于句子结构/系动词问题，需补上“is”使句子完整。

× Yes, I think dreams often have special means because they can represent a good imagination to life and they can also bring emotional value for some people because they bring a sense of happiness and enjoyment.

✓ Yes, I think dreams often have special meanings because they can represent imagination in life, and they can also bring emotional value to some people by giving a sense of happiness and enjoyment.

（1）“means”用错，语境中应为“meanings”（意义）。（2）“represent a good imagination to life”搭配不当，改为“represent imagination in life”更自然。 （3）“bring emotional value for some people”改为“bring emotional value to some people”介词用法更准确。总体调整使表达更地道、语法正确。

× Yes, I do study abroad for one year is my biggest dream.

✓ Yes, studying abroad for one year is my biggest dream.

句子结构错误。不能同时用助动词“do”和不带动词的名词性结构。表达“……是我的最大梦想”时应使用动名词短语作为主语，故改为“Studying abroad for one year is my biggest dream.”

× One was a child, I had the dream and now I received an offer and I just passed the language test.

✓ When I was a child, I had that dream, and now I have received an offer and have just passed the language test.

（1）“One was a child”不自然，应为“When I was a child”。（2）“the dream”如果指之前提到的梦想，用“that dream”更清楚。（3）时态混用：描述过去的童年用过去时“had”，而“now I received an offer”应使用现在完成时“have received”表示与现在相关的过去经历；“I just passed the language test”也建议使用现在完成“have just passed”。这样时态一致且语义清晰。

× I will come to this a dream.

✓ I will make this dream come true.

原句结构混乱且短语“come to this a dream”错误。常用表达是“make a dream come true”，意为“实现梦想”。因此改为“I will make this dream come true.”以符合英语习惯。