Part 1
Examiner
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Candidate
Yes actually, uh, I usually uh, lock myself in the mirror because before, especially before any celebrations or events or family gatherings uh, to, to make sure about my health, my clothes, uh, that uh, that way, uh, make my.
Examiner
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Candidate
Yes, I like to bought mirror because I think it's important things in in the in the house to make sure about yourself, about your appearance and to that good appearance make yourself more confident and OK.
Examiner
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Candidate
Yes, I usually carry a small mirror because I wear a makeup and I needed to touch my face touch up. I often use it when the car or work to fix lipstick or make sure about my.
Examiner
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Candidate
Yes, of course at my my room I have two mirrors and my kids they has they have two mirrors. So it is important it is, I think it is essential materials in the house to check yourself.
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Keep answers natural, concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I do.”), avoid hesitation fillers (uh, um), and use specific supporting details (how often and why). Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words such as “before” or “so” correctly.
Example: Yes, I do. I usually check myself in the mirror before events or family gatherings to make sure my clothes and hair look neat. This helps me feel confident, so I don’t worry about my appearance during the event.
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Begin with a simple statement about buying mirrors, then give concise reasons and an example. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly, and avoid repetition.
Example: Yes, I have bought mirrors for my home. I think mirrors are important because they help you check your appearance, which in turn makes you feel more confident. For example, I bought a full-length mirror to see how my outfit looks before I leave.
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Make sentences grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain when and why you carry a mirror using precise time/place phrases (e.g., “at work,” “in the car”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and add a linking word like “so” or “for example.”
Example: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror. I wear makeup, so I need it to touch up my lipstick and powder during the day, especially after commuting or before meetings.
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: Respond directly and organize ideas: say whether you would use mirrors for decoration, then give specific reasons (light, space, checking appearance) and a brief example. Remove repetition and correct grammar (e.g., “my kids have”). Use linking words like “also” or “because.”
Example: Yes, I would. I have two mirrors in my room and my children also have mirrors because they brighten the space and make it feel larger. Also, mirrors are practical for checking appearance before going out.
× Yes actually, uh, I usually uh, lock myself in the mirror because before, especially before any celebrations or events or family gatherings uh, to, to make sure about my health, my clothes, uh, that uh, that way, uh, make my.
✓ Yes actually, I usually look at myself in the mirror before celebrations, events, or family gatherings to check my health and clothes and to make myself look presentable.
The student used 'lock myself in the mirror' and 'make my' which are incorrect verb choices and incomplete. 'Look' is the correct verb for viewing oneself in a mirror; 'lock' is incorrect here. The sentence also lacked clear verb structure at the end. Suggestion: use 'look at myself' and complete the clause with a clear verb phrase such as 'to make myself look presentable.' Ensure verbs match the intended meaning and complete each clause. Grammar problem type ID:9
× Yes, I like to bought mirror because I think it's important things in in the in the house to make sure about yourself, about your appearance and to that good appearance make yourself more confident and OK.
✓ Yes, I like to buy mirrors because I think they are important in the house to check your appearance and to help you feel more confident.
The student used 'bought' (past tense) incorrectly after 'like to', which requires the base form 'buy'. There are also article and plural errors: 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' and 'important things' should be 'important' or 'important items' and 'they' is a clearer referent. Suggestion: after 'like to' use base verb 'buy'; use consistent plural or singular nouns; use 'check your appearance' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:5
× I like to bought mirror because I think it's important things in in the in the house to make sure about yourself, about your appearance and to that good appearance make yourself more confident and OK.
✓ Yes, I like to buy mirrors because I think they are important in the house to check your appearance and to help you feel more confident.
The phrase 'make sure about yourself' is an incorrect use of preposition 'about'. The correct phrase is 'check your appearance' or 'make sure you look presentable.' Suggestion: use 'check' + object or 'make sure' + clause (e.g., 'make sure you look presentable'). Grammar problem type ID:11},{