Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct pronouns and articles (e.g., "myself" not "me", "in a mirror" not "on a mirror") and avoid repetition. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details (e.g., "because", "so").

Example: Yes, I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror. I usually check my appearance every morning to make sure my hair and clothes look neat, and sometimes I glance at a mirror during the day because I like to feel presentable.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and a short explanation with correct tense and grammar. Use simple past for past purchases and present perfect for experience. Avoid filler words and repetition. One sentence to answer plus one to explain is enough.

Example: I haven't bought a mirror recently. The only one I bought was many years ago when I moved into my first apartment, and since then I've mainly used mirrors that came with furniture.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason using correct prepositions and pronouns. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

Example: No, I don't carry a mirror with me because I use my phone's front camera when I need to check my appearance. It's more convenient and takes up less space in my bag.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct articles and word order (e.g., "a mirror in my room", "it looks boring"). Avoid vague phrases like "find out". One topic sentence plus one specific reason is enough.

Example: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room. A large mirror can make a small room feel more spacious and it also reflects light, making the space brighter and more inviting.

× Yes, I like to watch me on a mirror.

✓ Yes, I like to watch myself in a mirror.

Use the reflexive pronoun 'myself' when the subject and object are the same person; use the preposition 'in' with 'mirror' and singular 'a mirror' rather than 'on a mirror'. Suggestion: replace 'me' with 'myself' and 'on a mirror' with 'in a mirror'.

× I really love to see myself on a mirror that how I'm looking today, how I am.

✓ I really love to see myself in a mirror to check how I look today and how I am.

Use 'in a mirror' not 'on a mirror'. Also use 'to check how I look' instead of 'that how I'm looking' for natural English and correct verb form. Combine clauses with 'to' or 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'in a mirror' and 'to check how I look today'.

× So yes, definitely I really like and I really enjoy to looking on a mirror.

✓ So yes, definitely I really like it and I really enjoy looking in a mirror.

After 'enjoy' use the gerund (-ing form): 'enjoy looking'. Use 'in a mirror' rather than 'on a mirror' and include 'it' after 'like' for natural expression. Suggestion: use 'enjoy looking in a mirror' and 'like it'.

× Oh, it usually I don't bought any mirrors, but I think yes, uh, it has been a very long time.

✓ Oh, I usually don't buy any mirrors, but I think it's been a very long time.

Use present tense 'don't buy' for habitual action rather than past 'bought'. Also reorder words: 'I usually don't buy' rather than 'it usually I don't'. Use contraction 'it's' for 'it has' when indicating elapsed time. Suggestion: use simple present for habits: 'I usually don't buy any mirrors.'

× Uh, I'm not buying a mirrors.

✓ Uh, I'm not buying mirrors.

After 'not buying' remove the article before the plural noun: 'mirrors' is plural so no 'a'. However, present continuous 'I'm not buying' implies temporary action; if you mean habit, use 'I don't buy mirrors.' Suggestion: choose 'I'm not buying mirrors' for a current plan or 'I don't buy mirrors' for a general habit.

× Uh, I think it's been a very long time. I didn't buy any mirrors yet.

✓ Uh, I think it's been a very long time. I haven't bought any mirrors yet.

When referring to an action that has not happened up to now, use present perfect 'have not bought' not simple past 'didn't buy' with 'yet'. Suggestion: use 'I haven't bought any mirrors yet.'

× No, I don't take mirror with myself because I have mobile cameras also there, so if I wanted to see myself so I see on my phone my mobile, I don't carry a mirror with myself.

✓ No, I don't carry a mirror with me because I have mobile phone cameras, so if I want to see myself I look at my phone; I don't carry a mirror.

Use 'carry a mirror with me' or 'with me' instead of 'with myself'. Use 'mobile phone cameras' or 'my phone camera'. For habitual action use present simple 'want' and 'look at'. Avoid repetition by simplifying the sentence. Suggestion: use 'carry a mirror with me' and 'look at my phone' for clarity.

× Find out. Obviously I have mirror on my room.

✓ I'm not sure. Obviously I have a mirror in my room.

Use 'a mirror' with singular countable noun and 'in my room' not 'on my room'. 'Find out' is unnatural here; replace with a phrase matching context such as 'I'm not sure' if unsure. Use 'in' for location inside a room. Suggestion: use 'a mirror' and 'in my room'.

× If mirror not there in any room it looks so boring.

✓ If there is no mirror in a room, it looks very boring.

Reorder sentence to include 'there is' for existence, use 'no mirror' and 'in a room'. Use 'very' rather than 'so' for a natural statement. Include 'there is' structure (There be issue) which matches ID 3 but primary problem is preposition and structure; included corrected form uses 'there is'. Suggestion: use 'If there is no mirror in a room, it looks very boring.'

× If we put mirror in our room, it looks so ambience looks so good.

✓ If we put a mirror in our room, the ambience looks much better.

Use 'a mirror' with countable noun, and 'ambience' is a noun so you need a verb phrase: 'the ambience looks much better.' Replace awkward 'looks so ambience looks so good' with concise comparative 'much better.' Suggestion: say 'the ambience looks much better' or 'the room looks more pleasant.'