Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and directly state your level for each language, use clearer structure and avoid filler words. Start with a topic sentence, then give brief supporting details (levels and a short plan). Use linking words like 'and' or 'however' correctly.

Example: I can speak Azerbaijani, Russian and English, and I'm also learning Spanish. My strongest language is Azerbaijani, while my English and Russian are at an intermediate level. I am a beginner in Spanish, but I practice daily and hope to become fluent within a couple of years.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give two concise supporting reasons using linking words (for example, 'because', 'however'). Avoid repetition and informal phrases like 'gonna' or fillers.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language can be difficult because it requires regular practice and strong motivation. However, if you set clear goals and study every day, progress becomes much easier and more consistent.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific reasons and an example, using correct verb forms and avoiding awkward phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I would like to improve my Spanish in the future because it is widely spoken and useful for travel and work. For example, when I visit Spain I will be able to communicate easily with locals and handle everyday situations like ordering food or asking for directions.

Suggestion: Give a clear, polite topic sentence explaining your main reason, then add a specific supporting detail about how you use English (study, work, travel). Avoid vague or awkward phrases like 'no release an answer' and repeat words less.

Example: I learn English because it is an international language useful for study and travel. For instance, I use English to access online courses and to communicate when I travel abroad, so it will help my education and future career.

× I can speak Spanish, English and Russian and Azerbaijani, even though I do speak Spanish now fluently.

✓ I can speak Spanish, English, Russian and Azerbaijani, and I speak Spanish fluently now.

The original sentence uses 'do speak' unnecessarily and the adverb 'now' is placed awkwardly. Use the simple present 'speak' for ability/skill and place adverbs like 'now' after the verb phrase or at the end: 'I speak Spanish fluently now.' Also commas separate items in a list: 'Spanish, English, Russian and Azerbaijani.' Suggestion: Use simple present for general abilities and place adverbs after the verb phrase.

× I think it's OK because I'm a starter and a beginner for this language and I believe that in the future when I grow up, uh, my skills are gonna get better.

✓ I think it's OK because I'm a beginner in this language, and I believe that in the future my skills will get better.

Use 'beginner in' (correct preposition) rather than 'starter and a beginner for'. 'Starter' is unnecessary. For formal grammar, replace colloquial 'gonna' with 'will'. Also 'when I grow up' implies age; if intended, keep it, but often 'in the future' is sufficient. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use 'beginner in' and 'will' for future tense in formal speech.

× Personally, I believe it is challenging to learn a new language unless you keep practicing every day and you really have this goal to learn it.

✓ Personally, I believe it is challenging to learn a new language unless you keep practicing every day and really have the goal to learn it.

The phrase 'have this goal' is awkward; use 'have the goal' or 'have a goal'. Removing the extra 'you' and 'this' makes the sentence more natural. No change in number, but adjustment improves article use and natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'have the goal' or 'have a goal' and avoid redundant pronouns.

× Because if you don't have any motivation or a goal, there's no point of learning a new language.

✓ If you don't have any motivation or a goal, there's no point in learning a new language.

Do not begin a sentence with 'Because if' in this context; it's redundant. More importantly, the correct preposition is 'point in' rather than 'point of'. Suggestion: Use 'there's no point in doing something' and avoid starting sentences with unnecessary 'Because'.

× However, if you do practice, it's gonna be easier.

✓ However, if you do practice, it will be easier.

Replace colloquial 'gonna' with the modal 'will' for correct future modal usage. 'Do practice' is acceptable for emphasis; keep it if desired. Suggestion: Use 'will' in formal contexts instead of 'gonna'.

× Oh, in the future, definitely I would like to speak Spanish.

✓ Oh, in the future, I would definitely like to speak Spanish.

Word order is awkward. Place adverb 'definitely' after the subject or after 'would' for natural phrasing: 'I would definitely like.' The tense/modal 'would like' is correct for polite desire about the future. Suggestion: Use natural adverb placement: 'I would definitely like to...'.

× For example, whenever I will travel to Spain, I will have this opportunity of spinning to speaking to native people there.

✓ For example, whenever I travel to Spain, I will have the opportunity to speak to native people there.

After 'whenever' use the present simple (not 'will') to refer to future events: 'whenever I travel.' 'Opportunity of spinning to speaking' is incorrect; use 'opportunity to speak.' Also use 'the opportunity' not 'this opportunity' for natural phrasing. Remove redundant gerunds. Suggestion: Use present simple after time conjunctions for future meaning and use 'opportunity to + base verb.'

× There is no release an answer for this question because English is just a major language that everybody should know.

✓ There is no single answer to this question because English is a major language that everybody should know.

'There is no release an answer' is ungrammatical and possibly a misphrasing. Use 'no single answer' or 'no single correct answer.' 'A major language' is fine. Also remove redundant 'just.' Suggestion: Use the idiom 'no single answer' and avoid extraneous words.

× Wherever you travel, in case if you don't speak the native language, you can always speak English like a lot of people now do speak English.

✓ Wherever you travel, if you don't speak the native language, you can always speak English like many people do.

Do not combine 'in case' with 'if'—use one. 'A lot of people now do speak English' is wordy; 'many people do' is concise and natural. Remove duplicate 'English.' Suggestion: Use 'if' alone for conditional and avoid repetitive phrasing.

× So it's a useful language and I'll definitely need it in my life currently and in the future as well.

✓ So it's a useful language, and I'll definitely need it in my life now and in the future as well.

'Currently' is awkward with 'in my life'; use 'now' for conversational English. Also add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. The future modal 'I'll' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'now' rather than 'currently' in this context and ensure natural clause punctuation.