Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp, nhưng cần sửa lỗi dùng từ “pie” thành “bike”, viết “cannot” hoặc “couldn’t” thay cho “can not” trong ngữ cảnh này, và dùng quá khứ “looked”. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

Example: Yes, definitely. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, although I can’t remember exactly what it looked like.

Suggestion: Bạn có nêu quan điểm và lý do, nhưng cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn: dùng “I don’t think so”, “modern, fast-paced lifestyle” và “public transport or their own cars”. Sửa cấu trúc song song và chia động từ thành “saves”. Tránh cụm không tự nhiên “save their time too much”; có thể nói “save time”. Nên giải thích rõ xe đạp ít phổ biến trong việc đi lại hằng ngày.

Example: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular for commuting in my country. Because of our fast-paced lifestyle, many people prefer public transport or their own cars, which are more convenient and save time.

× Yes, definitely. I used to have a pie, but I can not remember exactly how it look.

✓ Yes, definitely. I used to have a pie, but I cannot remember exactly how it looked.

Because the student is describing a bike from childhood, the verb in the embedded clause should be in the past tense: looked. Cannot is conventionally written as one word.

× No, I don't think that.

✓ No, I don't think so.

In this response, think needs a complete complement. The phrase I don't think so is the natural way to express disagreement without repeating the full idea.

× In the model and fast-speed lifestyle, people tend to use public transportation of their own car to commute because it's more convenient and save their time too much.

✓ In the model and fast-speed lifestyle, people tend to use public transportation or their own car to commute because it's more convenient and save their time too much.

Of does not correctly connect two alternatives here. Use the conjunction or to show that people choose between public transportation and their own car.

× In the model and fast-speed lifestyle, people tend to use public transportation of their own car to commute because it's more convenient and save their time too much.

✓ In the model and fast-speed lifestyle, people tend to use public transportation of their own car to commute because it's more convenient and saves their time too much.

The subject of the coordinated verbs is it, referring to the commuting option. In the present tense, a verb with the third-person singular subject it takes -s, so save should be saves.