Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答切题，但有多处用词和语法错误：“own the bar bike”表达不清，“wrote it”应为“rode it”，“bought from my mother”也不够自然。注意使用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历。建议先直接回答，再说明是谁买的以及你为什么很少骑；避免前后矛盾，并将回答控制在5句话以内。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me, but I rarely rode it because I was too young to ride confidently. Most of my friends rode their bikes more often than I did.

Suggestion: 回答表达了明确观点，也提到了共享单车这一相关例子，但需要修正主谓一致：“cycling is becoming”或“bikes are becoming”。“in street”应为“on the streets”，“sharing bikes”可改为“shared bikes”；“mutual city”含义不清，建议换成具体地点或“large cities”。减少“uh”和“umm”等填充词，并用连接词自然地解释原因。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are becoming increasingly popular in China. One reason is that shared bikes are easy to find on the streets, especially in large cities. They are a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances.

× Yes, of course I own the bar bike and it was bought from my mother, but I seldom wrote it when I was a child, for I was too young to ride a bike and usually my friends rode them.

✓ Yes, of course, I owned a bike, and it was bought by my mother, but I seldom rode it when I was a child because I was too young to ride a bike, and my friends usually rode them.

这句话讲的是童年经历，应使用过去时。own 应改为 owned。ride 的过去式是 rode；wrote 是 write 的过去式，不能用于表达“骑车”。

× Yes, of course I own the bar bike and it was bought from my mother, but I seldom wrote it when I was a child, for I was too young to ride a bike and usually my friends rode them.

✓ Yes, of course, I owned a bike, and it was bought by my mother, but I seldom rode it when I was a child because I was too young to ride a bike, and my friends usually rode them.

如果想表达“这辆自行车是我妈妈买的”，被动句中应使用 by 表示动作的执行者，因此应说 was bought by my mother。from 表示来源，原句会被理解为自行车是从妈妈那里买来的。

× Yes, I think cycling are becoming more and more popular in China. Uh, because umm, a lot of sharing bikes can be seen in street, especially in a mutual city.

✓ Yes, I think cycling is becoming more and more popular in China. Uh, because, um, a lot of shared bikes can be seen in the street, especially in a mutual city.

cycling 在这里是动名词，作单数主语，因此谓语动词应使用 is，而不是 are。可先判断主语的核心词，再选择与其单复数一致的谓语。

× Yes, I think cycling are becoming more and more popular in China. Uh, because umm, a lot of sharing bikes can be seen in street, especially in a mutual city.

✓ Yes, I think cycling is becoming more and more popular in China. Uh, because, um, a lot of shared bikes can be seen in the street, especially in a mutual city.

street 是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。这里可在 street 前加 the，改为 in the street。