Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Hãy nói “my first bike” thay vì “the first bike”, dùng “when I was two” nếu bạn muốn nói lúc hai tuổi, và dùng “bought me” hoặc “gave me” thay cho “brought to me”. Câu cuối “the previous gift that I had that I ever had” bị lặp ý; hãy diễn đạt rõ món quà đó có ý nghĩa hoặc đặc biệt với bạn như thế nào.

Example: Absolutely. I had my first bike when I was about two years old, and my parents bought it for me. It was a special gift, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý liên quan đến môi trường nhưng chưa trả lời rõ mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp như “Yes, they are quite popular” hoặc nêu rằng xe đạp chưa phổ biến bằng xe máy, rồi giải thích bằng một lý do cụ thể. Sửa “environment problems is” thành “environmental problems are”, “people has” thành “people have”, và tránh cấu trúc khó hiểu “my country they are using bike”.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are affordable and better for the environment than cars. However, many people still prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient.

× I had the first bike when I was in right two and this is also the first bike that my parents brought to me.

✓ I had my first bike when I was just two, and it was also the first bike my parents gave me.

The phrase 'in right two' uses an incorrect preposition and is not a natural way to state an age. Say 'when I was two' or 'when I was just two.'

× I had the first bike when I was in right two and this is also the first bike that my parents brought to me.

✓ I had my first bike when I was just two, and it was also the first bike my parents gave me.

The answer describes a childhood memory, so the verb should remain in the past tense. Change 'this is' to 'it was' to match the past-time context.

× It is also the previous gift that I had that I ever had.

✓ It was also the best gift I had ever received.

The repeated clause 'that I had that I ever had' makes the sentence structurally awkward and redundant. Use the past perfect form 'had ever received' to describe an experience before another past reference. 'Best gift' expresses the likely intended meaning more clearly than 'previous gift.'

× These days and the environment problems is one of the top concerned amongst not only authorities but also the rest residents.

✓ These days, environmental problems are one of the top concerns not only among authorities but also among the rest of the residents.

The subject 'environmental problems' is plural, so it must take the plural verb 'are,' not 'is.'

× These days and the environment problems is one of the top concerned amongst not only authorities but also the rest residents.

✓ These days, environmental problems are one of the top concerns not only among authorities but also among the rest of the residents.

'Concerned' is an adjective and does not fit after 'one of the top' here. Use the plural noun 'concerns': 'one of the top concerns.'

× These days and the environment problems is one of the top concerned amongst not only authorities but also the rest residents.

✓ These days, environmental problems are one of the top concerns not only among authorities but also among the rest of the residents.

The phrase is 'the rest of the residents,' not 'the rest residents.' The preposition 'of' is required after 'the rest' before a noun phrase.

× So that's also the reason why people has raised their awareness about protecting the environment and my country they are using bike.

✓ That is also why people have raised their awareness about protecting the environment, and people in my country are using bikes.

'People' is plural, so the verb must be 'have,' not 'has.' Match the verb to the plural subject.

× So that's also the reason why people has raised their awareness about protecting the environment and my country they are using bike.

✓ That is also why people have raised their awareness about protecting the environment, and people in my country are using bikes.

The clause 'my country they are using bike' has an unclear subject and an unnecessary second subject pronoun. Use 'people in my country' as the subject of the clause.

× So that's also the reason why people has raised their awareness about protecting the environment and my country they are using bike.

✓ That is also why people have raised their awareness about protecting the environment, and people in my country are using bikes.

'Bike' refers to bicycles in general here, so use the plural form 'bikes.'