Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yeah, I I did. I had back when I was about 12. And really it made me feel more independent because I could cycle to school by myself and live through narrow streets on my way home.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yeah, definitely It's popular in my country and then I was a child that time our country president prom promote the great travel and pay advise we can bye bye.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答切题,也说明了骑车带来的独立感,这是具体有效的补充。注意减少重复和停顿;“I had back when...”缺少宾语,建议说“I had one when...”;“live through narrow streets”表达不自然,可改为“ride through the narrow streets”。
Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about 12, and it made me feel more independent. I could ride to school on my own and cycle through the narrow streets on my way home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 28.0Suggestion: 开头直接回答了问题,但后续内容表达不清,且“bikes”是复数,应该用“they are popular”而不是“it’s popular”。建议用一到两个清晰的理由或例子来补充,例如说明人们骑车通勤、锻炼,或当地的骑行条件;避免加入无法准确表达的细节。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. Cycling is also a popular way to exercise.
× I had back when I was about 12.
✓ I had one when I was about 12.
“had”在这里表示“拥有”,后面需要有宾语。原句缺少宾语,因此句子结构不完整。可以用“one”代替前文提到的自行车,改为“I had one”。
× It's popular in my country.
✓ They're popular in my country.
问句中的主语是复数“bikes”,回答时应使用复数代词“they”,而不是单数代词“it”。同时,谓语动词也应与复数主语搭配,使用“are”。