Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, my father bought a bike for me when I was 8 years old.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, of course. In my country, in our city, Shenzhen. Most of child have has a bicycle when they are young.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: 回答直接、表达基本自然。可以补充一条具体细节,例如你骑车的地点、频率或感受,让回答更充实;注意控制在五句话以内。
Example: Yes, my father bought me a bike when I was eight. I used to ride it in the park near my home, especially on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 43.0Suggestion: 先直接回答问题,再用一两个细节说明原因或举例。避免重复说“my country”和“our city”;如果想提深圳,可以说“in cities like Shenzhen”。注意语法:用“most children”,并且此处用“have”,不要写成“have has”。
Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China, especially in cities like Shenzhen. Many children have bikes because they are a convenient way to get around and have fun outdoors.
× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen. Most of child have has a bicycle when they are young.
✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.
“Most”后面直接接可数名词时,名词要用复数形式,因此应将“child”改为“children”。可以说“most children”,也可以说“most of the children”;不能说“most of child”。
× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen. Most of child have has a bicycle when they are young.
✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.
主语“most children”是复数,因此谓语应使用“have”,不能使用“has”。原句中的“have has”也不能同时出现,应删去多余的动词形式。
× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen.
✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.
“In my country, in our city, Shenzhen.”只是地点短语,没有谓语动词,因此不是完整句子。可以把它与后面的内容连起来,并补上完整的主语和谓语。