Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时。你提到了不会骑车这一原因，可以保留，但要避免“don't didn't”这类自我重复；用“so”连接原因和结果即可。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I never learned how to ride one. As a result, my parents didn’t think there was a reason to buy me one.

Suggestion: 开头回答明确，但后面的表达有重复和语法错误。可以用“dedicated bike lanes”表达自行车专用道，并用“many people commute by bike”说明自行车的普及情况。删去“um”“very very”和重复的“in the society”，再用“because”或“for example”连接补充细节。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, so cycling is a convenient way to get around. For example, lots of people ride bikes to work or school, especially for short journeys.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned to ride, so my parents don't didn't buy me a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned to ride, so my parents didn't buy me a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此要使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”；“don't didn't buy”是重复且时态混乱，应改为“didn't buy”。

× In China, there are some roads that only bikes can can go.

✓ In China, there are some roads that only bikes can go on.

表达“骑车走在道路上”时，动词“go”后需要介词“on”，所以应说“go on the roads”。同时删去重复的“can”。

× And there's very very there are a lot of people ride bikes in the society in the society.

✓ And there are a lot of people who ride bikes in the society.

“There are a lot of people”后不能直接接“ride bikes”作为修饰语；需要加关系代词“who”，构成“people who ride bikes”。另外，删去重复和未完成的口语片段，使句子结构完整。