Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: La risposta è chiara e pertinente, ma ripeti l’idea di “when I was a child” e potresti aggiungere un dettaglio concreto per renderla più completa, ad esempio dove la usavi o come ti sentivi. Usa la punteggiatura per chiudere la risposta.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike when I was little, and I used to ride it around the park near my house.

Suggestion: Rispondi in modo più preciso alla domanda, chiarendo se le biciclette sono popolari oggi. “By motor” non è naturale: puoi dire “by motorbike”. Inoltre, la frase finale è incompleta: specifica che cosa si dovrebbe ridurre, per esempio il traffico o l’inquinamento. Collega l’opinione a un motivo concreto.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Italy, especially outside city centres. Many people travel by car, motorbike, or public transport. However, I think more people should cycle because it could reduce traffic and air pollution.

× I think that we should use more bikes to reduce

✓ I think that we should use more bikes to reduce pollution.

The sentence ends with the verb reduce, which needs an object here; without one, the thought is incomplete. Add what should be reduced, such as pollution, to make a complete sentence.