Bike— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
As of course the bikes are popular in my country. You can see every game riding in every corner of my country.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Your answer responds directly, but the second sentence repeats the first without adding information. Give a brief reason or detail to make your response more natural and informative.
Example: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My family didn't think I needed one because I could walk to school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: State your opinion directly without “As of course.” Correct “every game” to “everyone,” and use the natural phrase “all over the country.” Add a specific reason or example to support your answer.
Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. You can see people riding them all over the country, especially in cities where cycling is a convenient way to get around.
Grammar
× As of course the bikes are popular in my country.
✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country.
As is unnecessary and incorrectly placed before of course. Use Of course as a standalone introductory phrase, followed by a comma.
× As of course the bikes are popular in my country.
✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country.
The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the definite article the is not needed. Use the plural noun bikes without an article for a general statement.
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