Bike— Part 1 Report

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Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidate

Yes, I had a bicycle that my father bought me when I was 11. I spent hours practising on it around my neighborhood because I love the freedom it gave me, and years later it was passed down to my younger siblings as their first bike. MMM.

Examiner

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidate

Yes, 2 Wheelers are popular in my country. People prefer motorbikes or scooters over traditional bicycles because it's easier to use in heavy traffic and hilly terrain.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.5Fluency & Coherence: 6.5Pronunciation: 6.5Grammar: 6.5Lexical Resource: 6.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Score: 88.0

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and add a relevant personal detail, as you already do. To sound more natural, keep the verb tense consistent by changing “I love” to “I loved,” and remove “MMM,” which is an unnecessary filler.

Example: Yes, I had a bicycle that my father bought me when I was 11. I spent hours riding it around my neighborhood because I loved the sense of freedom. A few years later, my younger siblings used it as their first bike.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Score: 78.0

Suggestion: Answer the question more precisely by distinguishing between bicycles and motorbikes, since “bikes” can refer to both. Write “two-wheelers” in lowercase, and make the comparison clearer by specifying what “it” refers to. You could also add a brief example of where people use them.

Example: Yes, two-wheelers are very popular in my country, especially motorbikes and scooters. Many people choose them over bicycles because they are more practical in heavy traffic and on hilly roads. For example, commuters often use scooters to get to work.

Grammar

6: Present tense issue

× I spent hours practising on it around my neighborhood because I love the freedom it gave me, and years later it was passed down to my younger siblings as their first bike.

✓ I spent hours practising on it around my neighborhood because I loved the freedom it gave me, and years later it was passed down to my younger siblings as their first bike.

The sentence describes a childhood experience in the past, so loved is more consistent with the past-tense verbs spent and gave. Use the past tense when describing feelings tied to that past experience.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× People prefer motorbikes or scooters over traditional bicycles because it's easier to use in heavy traffic and hilly terrain.

✓ People prefer motorbikes or scooters over traditional bicycles because they are easier to use in heavy traffic and hilly terrain.

The pronoun it's is singular, but it refers to the plural options motorbikes or scooters. Use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are to agree with those options.

Vocabulary

Heavy— Weighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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