Bike— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Using my country they are very popular. I live in Germany and everyone has a bike and I see that every day someone rides a bike.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: Вы повторили вопрос экзаменатора вместо ответа, поэтому не сообщили никакой информации. Сразу ответьте «yes» или «no», а затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, когда вы катались или где хранили велосипед.
Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Ответьте на вопрос сразу: вместо неестественного «Using my country» скажите «In my country». Не утверждайте, что велосипед есть у каждого: это звучит слишком обобщённо. Также сократите повторение мысли о популярности и приведите конкретную причину или наблюдение. Для связи идей используйте, например, «because» или «for example».
Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in Germany. Many people use them to commute because cycling is convenient in cities, and I often see cyclists on my way to work.
Grammar
× Using my country they are very popular.
✓ In my country, they are very popular.
Use in, not using, to describe something that is popular within a country. Say In my country when introducing this information.
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