Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题，再用一到两个具体原因补充即可。注意谈论过去时要用过去式，例如用“didn't have”和“lived”；避免反复说没有自行车。可以把“父母不太富裕”和“住在乡村”作为两个理由，并用“because”或“also”连接。答案控制在两三句内。

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn't afford one at the time, and we lived in the countryside, where I didn't really need a bike.

Suggestion: 开头直接表达看法，并用具体观察来支持观点。避免使用难以确认的“世界上数量最多”这类绝对说法；可以改为“自行车很常见”。注意说“people ride bikes”，而共享单车可说“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”，不要说“public shirt running bike”。用“for example”连接例子，并避免重复词语。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. In many cities, people use them for short trips or to get to the nearest subway station. For example, shared bikes are easy to find along the streets.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child because that time I don't have a bike and my parents that time they're not that rich and we are living we were living in the countryside, so that I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have one at that time. My parents weren't very rich, and we were living in the countryside, so I didn't have a bike.

这段话描述的是童年时期的情况，应该使用过去时。表示“没有”应使用“didn't have”，而不是“don't have”；表示“父母当时不富裕”应使用“weren't”。口语中重复的“we are living”属于自我修正，保留正确的过去进行时“we were living”即可。

× when I was child；in the countryside

✓ when I was a child；in the countryside

可数名词单数“child”前通常需要限定词，因此应说“a child”。“countryside”在表示乡村这一地区时通常与定冠词连用，应说“the countryside”。

× that time

✓ at that time

表示“在那个时候”时，通常使用介词短语“at that time”，不能直接说“that time”。

× so that I don't have a bike

✓ so I didn't have a bike

这里的“so”表示“所以”，后面直接接结果即可，不需要再加“that”。此外，句子谈论过去，所以应使用“didn't have”。

× China is the has the b- largest amount of the bike in the world.

✓ China maybe has the largest number of bikes in the world.

“is the has”把“is”和“has”两个谓语结构错误地连在了一起。这里表达“中国拥有……”时，用“China has...”即可；“maybe”放在主要动词前也能使句子结构清楚。

× the largest amount of the bike

✓ the largest number of bikes

“bike”是可数名词，表示数量时应使用“number of”，而“amount of”通常用于不可数名词。因此应说“the largest number of bikes”。

× the bike；ride bike

✓ bikes；ride bikes

这里泛指中国有很多自行车，也泛指人们骑自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。

× all of people in the country

✓ all of the people in the country

“all of”后接特指的一群人时，需要使用“the”，因此应说“all of the people”。也可以简洁地说“all people in the country”。

× the ride bike

✓ they ride bikes

这里需要用主格代词“they”作“ride”的主语。“the”是冠词，不能代替“他们”，所以应改为“they ride”。

× there's ... public ... bike along the street everywhere

✓ There are public bikes along the streets everywhere.

“there be”结构中的动词要与后面的名词保持一致。“bikes”是复数，因此应使用“there are”，不能使用“there is”或缩写“there's”。