Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, absolutely the bags are popular in our country because our country people would like to protect our environment to avoiding global climate warming so rather.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: 你只是重复了考官的问题,没有给出自己的回答,因此没有回应题目。请先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一两点具体信息,例如什么时候骑车、在哪里骑,或骑车的感受。
Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 你表达了“自行车受欢迎,因为环保”的观点,但回答中用了“bags”,与问题不符;“our country people”和“to avoiding”也不自然,句尾“so rather”使表达不完整。请使用“bikes”,直接说明自行车受欢迎的原因,并补充一个具体场景或例子。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them for short trips because they are convenient and produce no air pollution.
× ...to avoiding global climate warming...
✓ ...to avoid global climate warming...
这里的 to 表示不定式,后面应接动词原形 avoid,不能接动名词形式 avoiding。表示“为了避免……”时,可用 to + 动词原形。
× ...our country people...
✓ ...people in our country...
表达“我们国家的人”时,英语通常说 people in our country,而不是 our country people。可用 in 将 people 与所在的国家联系起来。