Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因，但有明显重复和停顿（“my my”“So”），影响自然度。“my near my home”表达不正确；可以说“near my home”。结尾“I definitely don't have it”与童年经历的语境不太一致，可改为“I never owned one”。建议用一两句说明公共交通便利如何影响你学骑车。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. There were subway stations and bus stops close to my home, so I usually got around by public transport and never learned to ride one.

Suggestion: 你表达了“共享单车让骑车更方便”这一明确观点，也提供了相关原因。不过，“that depends”与后面直接说“很流行”衔接不够清楚；“sharing bike bikes”重复且不自然，“can just got”语法错误，应说“can easily rent bikes”。建议直接回答问题，再具体说明如何通过手机应用租车，以及共享单车为何受欢迎。

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in cities. People can rent one through a mobile app and leave it near their destination, which makes short trips convenient and affordable.

× Well, not really, because my my near my home there is really convenient transportation infrastructure like subway stations.

✓ Well, not really, because there is really convenient transportation infrastructure, such as subway stations, near my home.

“my my near my home”结构混乱，重复的“my”使句子无法正确连接地点短语和主句。建议将地点短语“near my home”放在句末，并删除重复词。

× So, uh, I definitely don't have it.

✓ So, uh, I definitely don't have one.

这里是在泛指“一辆自行车”，而不是指前文提到的某一辆特定自行车，因此用“one”代替单数可数名词“a bike”更合适。泛指某类事物中的一个时，可使用“one”；“it”通常指已经明确提到的特定事物。

× Well for my part I think it is really popular because we have some infrastructure like sharing bike bikes.

✓ Well, for my part, I think bike-sharing is really popular because we have bike-sharing services.

“sharing bike bikes”不是自然、正确的名词短语，多个名词堆叠后关系不清。表达“共享单车服务”时，可以说“bike-sharing services”。建议使用结构清晰的复合名词表达，避免重复或混乱地组合名词。

× People can just got some b- bikes through the online apps so I think it is quite convenient.

✓ People can just get bikes through online apps, so I think it is quite convenient.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，不能接过去式“got”。因此应改为“can get”。建议记住“情态动词 + 动词原形”的结构。