Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两句补充自行车的特点或你小时候骑车做什么。原回答中的“a little friend from China”意思不清楚，建议说明它是自行车的品牌、名字还是其他东西；“I'm used to go”应改为“我过去常常做某事”的“used to + 动词原形”，并删去重复的“go”。注意使用自然表达，例如“ride my bike”和“go on trips”。

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I was very fond of it. I used to ride it on short trips with my family, which was always a lot of fun.

Suggestion: 开头直接回答“是的，我认为自行车很受欢迎”，然后用具体观察作为依据。原回答中“I bomb a lot of bicycle side the dormitory”等表达难以理解；可以说“I often see a lot of bicycles parked beside the dormitory”。“this loves bicycle”也不自然，可改为“students like cycling”或“many students use bicycles”。避免口头重复，并说明自行车方便在哪里。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see many bicycles parked outside university dormitories. They’re a convenient way for students to get around campus, especially when they’re in a hurry.

× I have a little friend from China, it's called SDCC and I'm very lucky.

✓ I had a little friend from China; it's called SDCC, and I'm very lucky.

问题是在回答关于童年经历的问题时用了现在时“have”。如果这个物品是小时候拥有的，应使用过去时“had”。

× I'm used to go go to the trip to Highland parades by bike.

✓ I used to go to the trip to Highland parades by bike.

“used to do”表示过去经常做某事；这里不应在“used to”前加现在时“am”。可以用“I used to go”表达过去的习惯。

× I'm used to go go to the trip to Highland parades by bike.

✓ I'm used to go on trips to Highland parades by bike.

英语中通常说“go on a trip”（去旅行），而不是“go to a trip”。使用“go on trips”时，表达的是经常骑车去旅行。

× It's a such a meaningful activity I think.

✓ It's such a meaningful activity, I think.

“such”后面接“a/an + 形容词 + 单数可数名词”，所以应说“such a meaningful activity”，不能在“such”前再加一个“a”。

× I am, I, I bomb a lot of bicycle side the dormitory

✓ I am, I, I bomb a lot of bicycles side the dormitory

“a lot of”后接可数名词时，名词应使用复数形式，因此“bicycle”应改为“bicycles”。

× I am, I, I bomb a lot of bicycle side the dormitory

✓ I am, I, I bomb a lot of bicycle beside the dormitory

表示“在宿舍旁边”时，应使用介词“beside”；“side the dormitory”缺少合适的介词。