Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have a bike in my childhood. I remembered that my bike isn't has isn't have to round rows but have photos because I'm scared to fall down and I'm scared.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, in China we can see many um banks in our street and we use the QR code to scan it and then we can rent it instead of
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答时要使用过去时,例如用“had”代替“have”,用“was”代替“am”。第二句有多处表达不清,建议明确说明自行车有什么特点,以及这和害怕摔倒有什么关系;避免重复说“I’m scared”。可以先直接回答,再补充一两个具体细节,控制在两到三句。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had training wheels, which helped me feel safer because I was afraid of falling off.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答方向正确,但注意“banks”应为“bikes”,而且答案在“instead of”处中断,意思没有表达完整。先明确说明自行车很受欢迎,再用共享单车举例,并补充人们为什么使用它们。可以使用“for example”“because”等连接表达,让答案完整、自然。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. You can find them on many streets, and people use a QR code to rent one. They’re convenient for short trips and help people avoid traffic.
× Yes, I have a bike in my childhood.
✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.
“in my childhood”指过去的童年时期,因此应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是一般现在时“have”。
× I remembered that my bike isn't has isn't have to round rows but have photos because I'm scared to fall down and I'm scared.
✓ I remember that my bike didn't have [不清楚的内容], but it had photos because I was scared of falling down.
“isn't has isn't have”不符合英语的动词结构;讲述童年时,可用“didn't have”表示“当时没有”,并用“but it had”连接对比内容。原句中“to round rows”含义不清,无法可靠地进行语法修正;如果描述过去害怕摔倒,应使用“was scared”。