Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Check the difference between “writing” and “riding,” and use the pattern “like watching someone ride.” Give one clear detail about whether you rode your bike or watched other people ride. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t very confident riding it. I didn’t use it much, so I often watched other children ride their bikes instead.

Suggestion: Your main point is clear, but the explanation about road conditions is difficult to understand. Use “the roads in my country” rather than “my country is load,” and explain specifically what makes cycling unsafe, such as traffic or a lack of bike lanes. Link your ideas with “however” or “because.”

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. However, cycling isn’t always safe because many roads are busy and don’t have separate bike lanes.

× Yes I have

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the simple past tense with did, so the short answer should also use did, not have. Use Yes, I did to answer a past-tense question.

× I'm not good at writing so I'm not writing not much

✓ I'm not good at riding, so I don't ride much.

In context, riding is the relevant activity. For a habitual action, use the simple present, I don't ride. The phrase not much already conveys a small amount, so do not add another not.

× I like to watching riding bike someone

✓ I like watching someone ride a bike.

After like, you can use a gerund, as in like watching. In the pattern watch someone do something, use the base form ride, not riding. Use this pattern to describe watching another person ride.

× I like to watching riding bike someone

✓ I like watching someone ride a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when referring to any one bike.

× I like to watching riding bike someone

✓ I like watching someone ride a bike.

Place the person being watched directly after watching: watching someone ride a bike. This order makes the relationship between the actions and the person clear.

× so I always watching them

✓ so I always watch them.

Always describes a habitual action, so use the simple present watch. Watching cannot serve as the main verb here without an auxiliary such as am.

× my country is load is not good for riding a bike or other bicycles, so it's not really safe

✓ The roads in my country are not good for riding a bike or other bicycles, so riding is not really safe.

The original has two is verbs joined without a clear sentence structure. If you mean the roads, make them the subject and state that they are not good. This also makes clear that riding, rather than the country itself, is unsafe.

× my country is load is not good for riding a bike or other bicycles, so it's not really safe

✓ The roads in my country are not good for riding a bike or other bicycles, so riding is not really safe.

Roads is plural, so it takes are, not is. Match the verb to its subject: plural roads are.