Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答切题，也提供了自行车颜色和父母担心安全等细节。注意使用过去时：将“do have”改为“had”，“I were”改为“I was”；“write it”应为“ride it”，“I remember myself begging”可改为“I remember begging”。建议拆分过长的句子，并用“because”清楚说明父母不让你骑车的原因。

Example: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. It was my favorite color, and I loved riding it in my free time. I remember begging my parents to let me ride it, but they were worried it might be dangerous.

Suggestion: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，并保持观点一致：可以说明自行车仍然常见，但人们现在骑得比以前少。注意“bags”应为“bikes”，“bike”应改为复数“bikes”；“as more as before”可改为“as much as before”，“lesser”可改为“less often”，“transportations”通常用“transport”或“means of transport”。最后补全“自行车是很好的出行方式”，并用具体理由收尾。

Example: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially for short journeys. However, people probably ride them less often than they used to because the metro and cars are more convenient for longer trips. Cycling is still a good way to get around locally, and it can also help people stay active.

× I do have a bike when I were a child since this is my favorite color, pink.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, since pink is my favorite color.

这句话描述的是童年经历，应该使用过去时。“do have”应改为“had”；主语是“I”，所以“were”应改为“was”。“pink is my favorite color”描述现在仍然喜欢粉色，可以保留现在时。

× I always want to ride it in my free time and I remember myself always begging my parents to allow me to write it since they think it's dangerous and they want to look after me.

✓ I always wanted to ride it in my free time, and I remember myself always begging my parents to allow me to write it, since they thought it was dangerous and wanted to look after me.

这里是在回忆小时候的情况，因此描述当时的愿望和父母当时的想法、行为应使用过去时：“want”改为“wanted”，“think”改为“thought”，“is”改为“was”，“want”改为“wanted”。“remember”可以使用现在时，因为这是说话者现在的记忆。

× In China bags are quite popular but I think people don't use bike now as more as before since there's other transportations that are better, for example MTR trains and cars and so on.

✓ In China, bags are quite popular, but I think people don't use bikes as much as before now, since there are other forms of transportation that are better, for example MTR trains and cars.

泛指人们使用的自行车时，通常用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。修改后的句子也调整了同句中的比较表达和“there be”结构。

× In China bags are quite popular but I think people don't use bike now as more as before since there's other transportations that are better, for example MTR trains and cars and so on.

✓ In China, bags are quite popular, but I think people don't use bikes as much as before now, since there are other forms of transportation that are better, for example MTR trains and cars.

“as more as”不是正确的比较结构。这里比较使用自行车的程度，应使用“as much as”，组成“not ... as much as before”（不如以前那么……）。

× In China bags are quite popular but I think people don't use bike now as more as before since there's other transportations that are better, for example MTR trains and cars and so on.

✓ In China, bags are quite popular, but I think people don't use bikes as much as before now, since there are other forms of transportation that are better, for example MTR trains and cars.

“there be”结构中的动词要与后面的名词保持一致。“other forms”是复数，因此应使用“there are”，不能用“there is”。

× So they use bikes lesser.

✓ So they use bikes less.

这里的“less”修饰动词“use”，表示使用自行车的程度较少，应使用副词“less”。“Lesser”通常作形容词，不能在这里自然地修饰“use”。

× But bikes is always a good way to UMM.

✓ But bikes are always a good way to UMM.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此谓语动词应使用“are”，而不是单数形式“is”。