Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 質問にまず直接答え、その後に理由や関連情報を一つ加えましょう。また、「bike」は自転車かバイク（オートバイ）かを明確にしてください。自転車について聞かれている場合、年齢制限の説明は質問への答えとして不自然です。「I have car」は「I have a car」、「go somewhere with my friend」は「go places with my friends」のように表現します。文を短くし、理由をつなぐと伝わりやすくなります。

Example: No, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child. I don't own one now either; these days, I usually travel by car, especially when I'm going somewhere with my friends.

Suggestion: 「難しい質問です」と前置きするより、人気があるかどうかを最初に述べましょう。自転車に乗る人がいることと、主な交通手段が電車や車であることを、対比を示す「but」などでつなぐと論理的です。「most major」は「the most common means of transport」、「go do the tooling」は意図に合わせて「go touring」などの自然な表現に直しましょう。理由を説明する際は「Cars are more comfortable than bikes」のように比較表現を使い、文を完結させてください。

Example: Bicycles are used in Japan, but they aren't the main way people travel. In large cities, many people take the train, while others use cars because they are more comfortable for travelling with friends. Some people also ride bikes for exercise or touring.

× In Japan can ride a bike maybe 20 years old over.

✓ In Japan, people can ride bikes from around the age of 20.

The original clause is missing a subject before can ride, and the age phrase is not placed correctly. Include a subject such as people and use from around the age of 20 to express when something begins.

× I don't have bike now, but I have car.

✓ I don't have a bike now, but I have a car.

Bike and car are singular countable nouns, so they need an article. Use a before each noun when referring to one nonspecific item.

× I like to do go somewhere with my friend.

✓ I like going places with my friend.

The sequence to do go is not a grammatical verb structure. After like, use either to go or going; do not use both forms together.

× By the car.

✓ By car.

When describing a means of transportation, use by car without the definite article the. For example, say travel by car.

× Someone like a bike and go do the tooling.

✓ Someone likes riding a bike and going cycling.

Someone is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verbs need third-person singular forms: likes and goes. The original verb sequence is also unclear; riding a bike and going cycling express the likely intended activities more naturally.

× Most major is train or car.

✓ The main forms of transportation are trains or cars.

The sentence refers to multiple forms of transportation, so use plural nouns, trains and cars. The plural subject also requires are rather than is.

× Don't bike.

✓ Most people do not travel by bike.

The original clause has no subject, so it is unclear who does not ride a bike. Add a subject such as most people and use a complete verb phrase.

× Car is more comfortable than bike going somewhere with friend.

✓ A car is more comfortable than a bike for going somewhere with a friend.

Car, bike, and friend are singular countable nouns, so they need articles in this sentence. Use a before each noun when referring to one nonspecific car, bike, or friend.