Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了骑车地点，但时态和名词形式有错误：讲过去的事应使用“bought”和“rode”；“a children”应改为“a child”。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如你通常和谁一起骑车，或在哪里骑。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about six. I often rode it around the square near my home with my friends.

Suggestion: 回答中对“全国受欢迎”和“所在城市不受欢迎”的对比比较清楚，但“my city have”应改为“my city has”；“the people”不自然，可说“people”；“didn't or didn't”表达不清，且这里可用一般现在时说明普遍情况。建议具体解释山地地形如何影响骑车，并使用“however”或“because”连接观点。

Example: Yes, bikes are popular in many parts of my country. However, they are less common in my city because it has a lot of steep hills. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or bus.

× Yes, my parents buy it for me when I was a children.

✓ Yes, my parents bought it for me when I was a child.

这里说的是童年时发生的事情，因此动词 buy 应使用过去式 bought。描述过去发生的动作时，注意将动词变为相应的过去式。

× Yes, my parents buy it for me when I was a children.

✓ Yes, my parents bought it for me when I was a child.

children 是复数，不能与不定冠词 a 连用。这里指“我”一个孩子，应使用单数 child。注意冠词 a/an 后面通常接可数名词单数。

× Uh, I ride it in the square.

✓ Uh, I rode it in the square.

这句话是在描述小时候的经历，语境是过去时，因此 ride 应改为过去式 rode。叙述过去发生的动作时，要使用动词的过去式。

× Yes, the bicycle is very popular in my country, but it's not in my city because my city have lots of mountains.

✓ Yes, the bicycle is very popular in my country, but it's not in my city because my city has lots of mountains.

主语 my city 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的动词 have 应改为 has。主语是 he、she、it 或单数名词时，要注意动词的第三人称单数形式。

× So the people didn't or didn't ride bike in their lives.

✓ So people don't ride bikes in their lives.

这里是在概括人们现在的普遍情况，应使用一般现在时 don't，而不是表示过去的 didn't。描述普遍事实或习惯时，注意使用一般现在时。

× So the people didn't or didn't ride bike in their lives.

✓ So people don't ride bikes in their lives.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，bike 应使用复数 bikes。表达一般类别或习惯时，通常可以用可数名词的复数形式。