Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have is my mother bought to me?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
I think bike are popular in my country because I want the a bike is because in my country have a lot of child to use it. So I think each was so interesting and I also want it so I asked my mother to bought to me.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车,注意时态:问题使用过去时“Did you have”,回答应使用“I had”。表达“妈妈买给我”时说“my mother bought it for me”,不要说“bought to me”。
Example: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that my mother bought for me when I was about seven.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 先明确回答“自行车在你们国家是否流行”,再给出一到两个具体理由,例如很多孩子骑车上学或人们用自行车短途出行。注意主谓一致:“bikes are”;“a lot of children”;表达过去的“想要”用“wanted”,且“ask someone to”后接动词原形。删去重复的“I think”和与问题无关的个人经历。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially among children. Many of them ride to school or cycle around their neighborhoods because it is convenient and fun.
× Yes, I have...
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
问题询问的是童年时期的经历,因此回答也应使用过去时。这里应将 have 改为 had。
× Yes, I have is my mother bought to me?
✓ Yes, I had a bike. My mother bought it for me.
原句把多个结构混在一起,导致句子不完整且难以理解。回答时可先说“Yes, I had a bike”,再用“My mother bought it for me”补充说明。
× I think bike are popular in my country.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.
这里泛指自行车,应使用复数形式 bikes。复数主语与 are 搭配。
× I want the a bike.
✓ I want a bike.
名词 bike 前不能同时使用 the 和 a。此处表示想要一辆自行车,用不定冠词 a 即可。
× In my country have a lot of child to use it.
✓ There are a lot of children in my country who use bikes.
表示“某地有……”时,可以使用“There are + 复数名词”的结构。原句缺少 there,且 are 要与复数名词 children 搭配。
× A lot of child
✓ A lot of children
a lot of 后面可以接可数名词复数。child 的复数形式是不规则变化 children,而不是 childs。
× A lot of child to use it.
✓ A lot of children who use them.
这里谈论的是许多孩子使用自行车,因此指代复数的自行车应使用 them,而不是 it。也可以用 who use them 修饰 children。
× I think each was so interesting.
✓ I think bikes are very interesting.
这里表达的是对自行车的一般看法,应使用现在时 are。was 是过去时,不适合表达一般事实。
× I asked my mother to bought to me.
✓ I asked my mother to buy one for me.
ask someone to do something 中,to 后面要接动词原形,因此应使用 buy,而不是 bought。句子可改为“ask my mother to buy one for me”。
× My mother bought to me.
✓ My mother bought it for me.
表示“为某人买某物”时,通常使用 buy something for someone。这里应使用 for me,而不是 to me。