Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, I hadn't a bike in my childhood, but now I have my own bike. When I was a child I really wanted to ride a bike. I was using my friend's bike, but now I own a bike with my own money.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I live in India. Here bikes are very popular here. We have a lot of uh traffic in our roads. So if we want to get into a place on time, 2 Wheeler is the best option because if we use car, we will be stuck in the road.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Answer directly, then explain how you rode a friend's bike and how that changed. Use “didn’t have” rather than “hadn’t” for a past possession, and avoid repeating “my own bike.” The response is within the five-sentence limit, but can be more concise and natural.
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, although I really wanted one. I sometimes rode my friend’s bike, and I finally bought my own with my savings as an adult.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 67.0Suggestion: Start with a direct answer and remove the repeated “here” and the hesitation “uh.” Give a clear reason, using “on our roads” and “a car,” and explain that two-wheelers can move through traffic more easily. “Two-wheelers” is more natural than “2 Wheeler” in this context.
Example: Yes, two-wheelers are very popular in India, especially in busy cities. Because traffic can be heavy, people often use motorbikes to get around more quickly than they would by car.
× No, I hadn't a bike in my childhood, but now I have my own bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but now I have my own bike.
To make a negative statement about possession in the past, use did not (didn't) + the base form of the verb: didn't have. In this context, hadn't is not the standard form.
× We have a lot of uh traffic in our roads.
✓ We have a lot of traffic on our roads.
Use on with roads when describing traffic that is moving or present there. In is not the natural preposition in this expression.
× So if we want to get into a place on time, 2 Wheeler is the best option because if we use car, we will be stuck in the road.
✓ So if we want to get to a place on time, a two-wheeler is the best option because if we use a car, we will be stuck in traffic.
Use get to a place when you mean arriving at a destination; get into usually means entering an enclosed space. The natural expression for being delayed by traffic is stuck in traffic, rather than stuck in the road.
× So if we want to get into a place on time, 2 Wheeler is the best option because if we use car, we will be stuck in the road.
✓ So if we want to get into a place on time, a two-wheeler is the best option because if we use a car, we will be stuck in the road.
Two-wheeler and car are singular countable nouns, so they need an article when used this way. Use a before each noun: a two-wheeler and a car.