Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is direct, grammatically correct, and natural. To make it more engaging, add one specific detail, such as how often you rode the bike or where you used it.

Example: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Suggestion: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but the answer ends in an incomplete phrase: “the roads are not appropriate for.” Finish the idea by saying what the roads are unsuitable for. Also, “terrific traffic” is incorrect here; use “heavy traffic,” since “traffic” is uncountable. Link your reasons more smoothly and keep the wording concise.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many cities are crowded and have heavy traffic, and the roads often aren’t safe for cyclists.

× From my perspective, bikes are not so popular in my country because most of the cities are crowded, there are terrific traffics in many cities and the roads are not appropriate for.

✓ From my perspective, bikes are not so popular in my country because most cities are crowded, there is heavy traffic in many cities, and the roads are not suitable for cycling.

Traffic is an uncountable noun, so it is not normally made plural. Use there is with traffic, and say heavy traffic to describe congested roads. The phrase appropriate for also needs an object; adding cycling completes it.

× From my perspective, bikes are not so popular in my country because most of the cities are crowded, there are terrific traffics in many cities and the roads are not appropriate for.

✓ From my perspective, bikes are not so popular in my country because most cities are crowded, there is heavy traffic in many cities, and the roads are not suitable for cycling.

The ending for leaves the sentence incomplete because for must be followed by a noun or an -ing form in this context. Add cycling to complete the idea. Also, use a conjunction or suitable punctuation to clearly connect the reasons.