Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I did. My father bought me a small pink bike when I was five, and I often rode it with my friends after class. I used to practice riding every weekend until I feel confident to ride without training wheels.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I think bicycles have become more popular in recent years. Firstly, cycling is a healthy option and a good way to keep fit. I override my bike to a nearby park after dinner. Secondly, it's an eco friendly and convenient way to commute. And many people use bikes for short journey to work or the shops.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 82.0Suggestion: 回答直接且细节具体,提到了自行车的颜色、购买时间和骑车场景。注意时态一致:讲过去的经历时,应把“feel”改为“felt”。“practice riding”也可以换成更自然的“practice riding it”。
Example: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small pink bike when I was five, and I often rode it with my friends after school. I practiced riding it every weekend until I felt confident enough to ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答观点明确,并用健康和通勤两个理由展开,结构较清楚。不过,“I override my bike”表达错误,应改为“I ride my bike”;“eco friendly”应写作“eco-friendly”;“short journey”应改为复数“short journeys”。避免用“And”单独开始句子,并可补充具体场景,让支持细节更自然。
Example: Yes, I think bicycles have become more popular in recent years. Cycling is a healthy way to keep fit, and I often ride my bike to a nearby park after dinner. It is also an eco-friendly and convenient way to travel. For example, many people cycle to work or to local shops when the journey is short.
× I used to practice riding every weekend until I feel confident to ride without training wheels.
✓ I used to practice riding every weekend until I felt confident to ride without training wheels.
句子描述的是过去的经历,前面的“used to practice”也表明语境在过去,因此“feel”应改为过去式“felt”,与整句时态保持一致。
× And many people use bikes for short journey to work or the shops.
✓ And many people use bikes for short journeys to work or the shops.
“many people”表示许多人,后面说的是他们通勤或去商店时使用自行车的普遍情况,因此这里应使用可数名词复数“journeys”。