Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes I do and I'm very happy to ride the bag. I usually went to the cinema by back and go hospital with my friend.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I think so, but and some people didn't have bags. Yes, because coats the bags are very expensive.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车,注意使用过去时,例如 “Yes, I did”。“bag”应为“bike”,“by back”可改为“by bike”。描述过去的习惯时,统一使用过去时;也要补上冠词,如“go to the hospital”。建议用一到两句说明骑车去过哪里,让内容更清楚自然。
Example: Yes, I did. I rode my bike quite often when I was a child, usually to the cinema or the hospital with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,再用一个清晰的理由或对比展开。避免同时使用“but”和“and”;“bags”应为“bikes”,“coats”应为“because”,“very expensive”前应说明具体是什么贵。可以提到自行车价格较高会让部分人买不起,但不要让理由和观点显得矛盾。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. However, some people still don’t own one because good-quality bikes can be expensive.
× Yes I do and I'm very happy to ride the bag.
✓ Yes, I did and I'm very happy to ride the bag.
问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,时间背景是过去,因此回答应使用过去时 did,而不是现在时 do。回答过去发生的事情时,要注意让助动词与问题的时态保持一致。
× I usually went to the cinema by back and go hospital with my friend.
✓ I usually went to the cinema by back and went hospital with my friend.
句中的 usually went 描述过去的习惯,因此后面的并列动词也应使用过去时 went,而不是现在时 go。描述同一过去时间段内的多个习惯时,应保持动词时态一致。
× I usually went to the cinema by back and go hospital with my friend.
✓ I usually went to the cinema by back and go to the hospital with my friend.
英语中表示“去某地”通常使用 go to + 地点,因此 hospital 前需要加介词 to。可以记住常见搭配 go to the hospital。
× Yes, I think so, but and some people didn't have bags.
✓ Yes, I think so, but some people didn't have bags.
but 和 and 都是连词,这里同时使用会造成连词重复。表达转折时保留 but 即可;使用连词时要根据句意选择一个合适的连词。