Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve cevabın başındaki tekrar ile yanlış ifadeyi düzeltin. Ardından cevabı daha doğal ve akıcı hâle getirmek için çocukken bisikletinizi nerede veya ne sıklıkla kullandığınıza dair kısa, somut bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Suggestion: Önce bisikletlerin popüler olup olmadığına net bir yanıt verin. Tekrarı önleyin ve “bike roads” yerine bu bağlamda daha doğal olan “bike lanes” ifadesini kullanın. Neden olarak araba kullanımını ve bisiklet yollarının azlığını kısa, mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın.

Example: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because many people prefer to travel by car. Also, there aren’t enough bike lanes, so cycling can be inconvenient.

× Yes, I had a child I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase I had a child is an incomplete or unintended repetition that disrupts the sentence structure and changes the meaning. Give a direct answer by stating that you had a bike when you were a child.

× There's no also there's no bike roads for the drivers.

✓ There are also no bike roads for drivers.

Bike roads is plural, so use there are rather than there's, which means there is. Match the verb to the plural noun that follows.

× There's no also there's no bike roads for the drivers.

✓ There are also no bike roads for drivers.

Also should come before the negative phrase no bike roads, not between no and the repeated clause. Avoid repeating the clause and place also before the phrase it modifies.