Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp trước, sau đó thêm một chi tiết rõ ràng về hoạt động bạn thường làm khi còn nhỏ. Câu trả lời hiện khó hiểu và có nhiều từ lặp lại như “umm”, “bored” và “I feel”. Dùng quá khứ đơn với “I was” hoặc “I used to”, đồng thời diễn đạt chính xác món đồ và việc mẹ cất đồ trong hộp.

Example: No, I didn’t. I used to play with toys at home instead, and my mother kept them in a box. I was quite happy doing that.

Suggestion: Nêu ý kiến trực tiếp rằng xe đạp phổ biến, rồi đưa một quan sát cụ thể và lý do. Cụm “around bicycle” chưa tự nhiên; hãy nói “people riding bikes” hoặc “people cycling”. Thay cụm khó hiểu “not causal environmental population” bằng “environmentally friendly” hoặc “don’t cause air pollution”.

Example: Yes, they are quite popular. I often see people cycling around my neighbourhood. Bikes are environmentally friendly and good for people’s health, so they’re a practical choice.

× When I were a child

✓ When I was a child

Use was with the singular subject I in the past tense. Were is used with you, we, and they, or in certain subjunctive constructions.

× I like rolling the thing around me bored

✓ I liked rolling the thing around when I was bored

The question asks about childhood, so use the past-tense form liked. The phrase when I was bored also makes the time relationship clear.

× I feel happy with I feel.

✓ I felt happy.

The original repeats I feel and does not form a clear grammatical sentence. Use the simple past felt to match the childhood context.

× I often see many people around bicycle

✓ I often see many people around bicycles

Bicycle is a countable noun, and the sentence refers to bicycles in general. Use the plural form bicycles after referring to many people and bikes.