Bike— Part 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidate

Yes I have, I remember I learned to ride bike. It's in my 7 years old then I get my first bike in 10 years old.

Examiner

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidate

Bike was very popular in 10 years ago. I love people have more choice.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.0Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Score: 45.0

Suggestion: 先直接回答“小时候有自行车”,再按时间顺序说明你几岁学会骑车、几岁得到第一辆自行车。注意使用过去时:把“have”改为“did”,“get”改为“got”;年龄用“at the age of seven”或“when I was seven”,并在“ride”后加“a bike”。

Example: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was seven, and I got my first bike when I was ten. I was really excited because I could ride it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Score: 30.0

Suggestion: 问题询问的是现在自行车是否受欢迎,因此要用现在时回答,而不是只谈十年前。注意“bikes”应使用复数;表达“十年前”应说“ten years ago”,不能说“in ten years ago”。补充一个具体原因或例子,并把“I love people have more choice”改成自然、意思明确的表达。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people use shared bikes for short trips. People also have more options now, such as electric bikes.

Grammar

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes I have

✓ Yes, I did.

问题是时态不一致。考官用一般过去时询问“Did you have...”,回答时应使用过去时助动词 did,而不是现在完成时形式 have。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× I remember I learned to ride bike.

✓ I remember I learned to ride a bike.

bike 是可数名词单数,泛指一辆自行车时,前面需要加不定冠词 a。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× It's in my 7 years old then

✓ I was seven years old then.

这里描述的是说话者当时的年龄,因此主语应使用 I,而不是指物或指代其他事物的 it。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× It's in my 7 years old then

✓ I was seven years old then.

then 表示过去的时间,描述过去的年龄应使用 be 动词过去式 was,而不是现在时 is。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I get my first bike in 10 years old.

✓ I got my first bike at age ten.

句子讲述过去发生的事情,get 应改为过去式 got。回答过去经历时,注意整句话保持过去时。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I get my first bike in 10 years old.

✓ I got my first bike at age ten.

表示某人几岁时,不能说 in 10 years old。可以说 at age ten,或 when I was ten years old。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× Bike was very popular in 10 years ago.

✓ Bikes were very popular ten years ago.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数 bikes;主语是复数,因此 be 动词也要用 were。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Bike was very popular in 10 years ago.

✓ Bikes were very popular ten years ago.

表示“十年前”时直接说 ten years ago,不需要在 ago 前加介词 in。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I love people have more choice.

✓ I love that people have more choices.

love 后面接一个完整句子作宾语时,可用 that 引出从句。原句中 people have more choice 直接接在 love 后,句子结构不完整。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× I love people have more choice.

✓ I love that people have more choices.

choice 是可数名词。more 表示有多种选择时,通常使用复数 choices。

Vocabulary

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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