Bike— Part 1 Report

PracticePart12026-10-27 00:18:47

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Part 1

Examiner

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidate

I don't know, I don't have a bike.

Examiner

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidate

Yes, in my country everybody using bikes and everybody have a bike and that's really easy way.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.0Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Score: 28.0

Suggestion: Yanıtınız sorunun geçmiş zamanla ilgili kısmını doğrudan karşılamıyor; “I don't have a bike” şu anki durumu anlatıyor. Çocukluğunuzla ilgili hatırladığınız bilgiyi belirtin. Emin değilseniz bunu doğal biçimde ifade edip kısa bir ek bilgi verin.

Example: I can't remember clearly whether I had a bike as a child. I don't own one now, though.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Score: 38.0

Suggestion: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız iyi; ancak “everybody using” yerine “everybody uses”, “everybody have” yerine “everybody has” kullanın. “Everybody” ifadesi aşırı genelleyici ve tekrarlı; bisikletlerin kimler arasında veya neden popüler olduğunu daha somut bir ayrıntıyla açıklayın. Son bölümde “an easy way to get around” gibi doğal bir ifade kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They're an affordable and convenient way to get around.

Grammar

5: Past tense issue

× I don't know, I don't have a bike.

✓ I don't know; I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer about owning a bike should use the past tense. Use didn't have rather than don't have.

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, in my country everybody using bikes and everybody have a bike and that's really easy way.

✓ Yes, in my country everybody uses bikes, and everybody has a bike, and that's a really easy way.

For a general fact or habit, use the simple present. Everybody using is missing a finite verb; say everybody uses. Everybody is grammatically singular, so use has, not have.

22: Article errors

× Yes, in my country everybody using bikes and everybody have a bike and that's really easy way.

✓ Yes, in my country everybody uses bikes, and everybody has a bike, and that's a really easy way.

The singular countable noun way needs an article. Use a before really easy way.

Vocabulary

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
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