Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，但“ever had”用法不自然；可说“I had a bike”或“I once had a bike”。“from my parents”也可以改成“that my parents bought me”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或用途，让回答更完整。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I often rode it around our neighbourhood after school.

Suggestion: 回答中把“bikes”说成了“the bag”，导致意思不清；注意使用复数“bikes”。题目询问现在的情况，应先直接回答现在自行车是否受欢迎，再补充原因或与过去的对比。注意主谓一致和时态：“most people didn’t have much money”。避免重复“much much”。

Example: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially for short trips. They’re affordable and convenient, and many people also use shared bikes to get around cities. Compared with ten years ago, though, more people now have cars.

× Yes, when I was a child, I ever had a bike from my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike from my parents.

这里的“ever”不适合用于这个肯定句中的一般过去时表达。它通常用于疑问句、否定句或现在完成时中。此处直接删除“ever”即可。

× Well, in my opinion, maybe about 10 years ago, the bag is popular in China because at that time most of the people don't have much much money to buy a car.

✓ Well, in my opinion, maybe about 10 years ago, the bag was popular in China because at that time most of the people didn't have much much money to buy a car.

“about 10 years ago”和“at that time”都指过去，因此描述当时的情况应使用一般过去时：“is”改为“was”，“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

× Well, in my opinion, maybe about 10 years ago, the bag is popular in China because at that time most of the people don't have much much money to buy a car.

✓ Well, in my opinion, maybe about 10 years ago, the bag is popular in China because at that time most of the people don't have much money to buy a car.

“much”被重复使用了一次。表达“很多钱”时，保留一个“much”即可。