Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答是否拥有自行车，例如用“Yes, I did.”开头。表达家庭给孩子买自行车时，可说“many Chinese families buy their children a bike”，不要使用“a family will parents will”这类重复且不完整的结构。“in an early age”应改为“at an early age”；“transportation”在这里可换成更自然的“a way to get to school”。最后一句的“a bike or a Sprint”意思不清楚，请说明具体感受或回忆。避免“I see”这样的无关开场，并注意统一过去时。

Example: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was young. It was useful for getting around and riding to school. I was really proud of it.

Suggestion: 你的回答有明确表态，也提到了街上的自行车和通勤用途。建议删掉重复的“in daily life”，并避免“I do think so”之后再次重复“they are very popular”。可以用连接词“because”自然说明自行车受欢迎的原因。表达“上班日交通繁忙”时，可说“even on busy weekdays”；“go outing”应改为“go out”或“go on outings”。结尾补上句号，并用一两个具体用途支撑观点即可。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I often see people riding them on busy weekdays, especially in crowded areas. They are convenient for commuting because people can avoid traffic and find parking more easily. Some people also use them for exercise or short outings.

× I think in normal Chinese family, a family will parents will find children, the bicycle for exercising them in an early age and it's a very useful transportation for children to go to school.

✓ I think in a normal Chinese family, parents will find their children a bicycle for exercising at an early age, and it's a very useful means of transportation for children to go to school.

“family”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词，因此应在“normal”前加“a”。

× I think in normal Chinese family, a family will parents will find children, the bicycle for exercising them in an early age and it's a very useful transportation for children to go to school.

✓ I think in a normal Chinese family, parents will find their children a bicycle for exercising at an early age, and it's a very useful means of transportation for children to go to school.

“a family will parents will”重复了主语和谓语，且“find children, the bicycle”语序不通。可简化为“parents will find their children a bicycle”，即“父母会给孩子找一辆自行车”。

× I think in normal Chinese family, a family will parents will find children, the bicycle for exercising them in an early age and it's a very useful transportation for children to go to school.

✓ I think in a normal Chinese family, parents will find their children a bicycle for exercising at an early age, and it's a very useful means of transportation for children to go to school.

表示“在很小的年纪”时，固定搭配是“at an early age”，不能用“in an early age”。

× I think in normal Chinese family, a family will parents will find children, the bicycle for exercising them in an early age and it's a very useful transportation for children to go to school.

✓ I think in a normal Chinese family, parents will find their children a bicycle for exercising at an early age, and it's a very useful means of transportation for children to go to school.

“transportation”通常是不可数名词，不能直接用“a”修饰。可以说“a means of transportation”，表示“一种交通方式”。

× And when I was a child, I'm very proud of having a bike or a Sprint.

✓ And when I was a child, I was very proud of having a bike or a Sprint.

句子描述的是“小时候”的情况，时间在过去，所以应将“I'm”改为过去式“I was”，与“when I was a child”保持时态一致。

× I do think so. in daily life, daily life, I can see so many bikes on the streets even on the working days when it's very busy traffic.

✓ I do think so. In daily life, I can see so many bikes on the streets, even on working days when traffic is very busy.

泛指通常的工作日时，一般说“on working days”，不需要定冠词“the”。

× I do think so. in daily life, daily life, I can see so many bikes on the streets even on the working days when it's very busy traffic.

✓ I do think so. In daily life, I can see so many bikes on the streets, even on working days when traffic is very busy.

“it's very busy traffic”结构不自然。这里要表达“交通很拥堵”，应以“traffic”为主语，说“traffic is very busy”。

× Um and they are very popular and very convenient for people to go to work or even go outing or traveling.

✓ Um, they are very popular and convenient for people to go to work, go on outings, or travel.

“outing”作名词时，通常说“go on an outing”或“go on outings”，不能说“go outing”。