Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句补充具体信息。注意发音或用词：这里应是“bike”，不是“back”；表达“给我买了一辆自行车”应说“bought me a bicycle”或“bought a bicycle for me”。避免重复“when I was a child”，并统一过去时。说清楚奶奶买车的原因，例如她希望你能自己骑车上学。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was 13, my grandmother bought me a bicycle so I could ride to school on my own. I used it almost every day.

Suggestion: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎。注意这里应说“bikes”，不是“bags”。用“more and more people”表达“越来越多的人”，用“choose”而不是“choice”；“cheaper and faster”比“more cheap, more quickly”更自然。补充一个具体原因或场景，并用“because”或“for example”连接，避免重复和不完整句。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. More and more people choose them because they are cheaper than cars and convenient for short trips. For example, people often ride bikes to work or to nearby shops.

× She bought a bicycle to me.

✓ She bought a bicycle for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时，通常用“buy something for someone”，而不是“buy something to someone”。

× When I was 13 years old, my grandma, she bought a bicycle to me because she won't.

✓ When I was 13 years old, my grandma bought a bicycle for me because she wanted me to have one.

这段话讲的是过去发生的事情，因此“won't”这个表示将来的形式与语境不符。可用过去式“wanted”。另外，“my grandma, she”重复表达了主语，删去“she”即可。

× I went to, I go to work by myself every day.

✓ I went to work by myself every day.

句子描述童年时期每天独自去工作的习惯，应使用过去时“went”。“I went to”是未完成的口误片段，应删去。

× Nowadays people more and more want to want to choice more cheap, more quickly.

✓ Nowadays, people increasingly want to choose cheaper, faster ways to get around.

“cheap”和“quickly”在这里用于比较，应使用比较级“cheaper”和“faster”。“more cheap”不符合常见比较级构成；描述出行方式时，用形容词“fast”修饰名词“ways”，而不是用副词“quickly”。

× Way to go out to somewhere.

✓ They want cheaper, faster ways to get somewhere.

原句缺少主语和谓语，是不完整的句子片段。可以将其与前面的意思连起来，补出完整的主谓结构。