Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答没有直接说明小时候有没有自行车。建议先用“Yes”或“No”作答，再补充原因；注意说“when I was a child”，不能省略冠词“a”。开头的“Now”与过去经历不匹配，可以删掉。

Example: No, I didn't. My family was quite poor when I was a child, so we couldn't afford a bike.

Suggestion: 建议先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，再补充具体情况。注意“everybody”作主语时通常搭配单数动词，如“everybody rides”；表达骑自行车应说“ride a bike”，而不是“write back”。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in busy cities, because they are convenient and affordable.

× Now, when I was child, we were very poor.

✓ Now, when I was a child, we were very poor.

单数可数名词 child 前通常需要冠词。这里应在 child 前加不定冠词 a，表示“一个孩子／小时候”。

× Yeah, everybody are writing back.

✓ Yeah, everybody is writing back.

Everybody 虽然指“每个人”，但语法上视为单数，因此后面的 be 动词应使用 is，而不是 are。