Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have AI have a bike, a mature and my children, my children, my children have my bike and I always day by day to, uh buy bikes. Uh, first, my mom, my mom always touch TT teach me.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, the bike, the the bikes is popular in my country. Uh, some people go to go to work, uh, by bike or the subway is so far they buy bike and I think I, I, I think bike is very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: 回答内容目前较难理解,且有较多重复、停顿和语法错误。先直接回答“小时候有/没有自行车”,再补充一个清楚的细节,例如谁教你骑车或你常在哪里骑。注意使用过去时,如“had”和“taught”,并避免重复同一词句。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother taught me how to ride it, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎,也给出了通勤和便利性的理由,这是不错的基础。请使用正确的复数表达“bikes are”,并减少重复。把原因说清楚,例如有些人骑车上班,尤其是在地铁站较远或短途出行时;可以用“because”连接理由。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a convenient way to get around. Some people ride them to work, especially when the subway station is far away or the journey is relatively short.
× Yes, I have AI have a bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
问题问的是小时候的经历,时间在过去,因此应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是一般现在时“have”。回答过去经历时,注意让动词时态与问题中的时间保持一致。
× My mom always touch TT teach me.
✓ My mom always taught me.
这里是在描述小时候母亲教你的事情,应使用“teach”的过去式“taught”。可以记住不规则动词变化:teach—taught—taught。
× The bikes is popular in my country.
✓ Bikes are popular in my country.
主语“bikes”是复数,谓语动词应使用“are”,不能使用单数形式“is”。谈论一类事物的一般情况时,通常可以直接使用复数名词,不必加“the”。
× Some people go to go to work by bike or the subway is so far they buy bike.
✓ Some people go to work by bike, or if the subway is too far away, they buy a bike.
原句把几个意思不同的部分直接连接起来,句子结构不清楚。可以用“if”引导条件从句,表达“如果地铁太远,他们就买一辆自行车”。此外,“go to go to work”中重复出现了“go to”,改为“go to work”即可。
× Some people ... they buy bike.
✓ Some people ... they buy a bike.
“bike”是单数可数名词,前面通常需要冠词。这里表示买任意一辆自行车,应使用不定冠词“a”。
× I think bike is very convenient.
✓ I think bikes are very convenient.
这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具,使用复数“bikes”更自然,也不需要加冠词。泛指复数可数名词时,通常直接使用复数形式。